j-nasty

i'm looking to move to California by the end of next summer. I wanna be somewhere thats within driving distance of a beach and ski resort as well. What are some places that are affordable but within these areas?

ok so all i need help w is the chorus but i wouldnt mind anybody telling me what they think about it as well

verse 1

the story's just begun,

i'm sorry i'm not there,

I hear you in the air,

life turns a page,

things are well and good,

they're exactly as they should....be,

*chorus*

verse 2

day turns into night,

I can feel you cryin,

you know it makes me die, everytime,

you know when you said,

you'll always be there?

I acted like i didn't care,

*chorus*

bridge

and if i wanted to take it back, would that be alright?

to rewrite the story, and do it right this time?

you know i'll be waiting, and that'll never change,

just make me a promise that you'll wait for me!

verse 3

the ending changes with the year,

she wants to go back home,

she wants to disappear,

I say "you can't go,"

the story's not over,

I need to let you know!

*chorus*

ok so i HAD this "friend"...

he used to play drums in my band...

we kicked him out for overusing drugs (we were all into them but hed ditch practice for it)...

hes trying to get with my girl everytime i have my back turned...

he knows i love her...

we broke up...the next day i walked in on him trying to put his arm around her (he was on the move but jerked it away when i walked in)....

anyways last saturday...he tried to see if she was gonna hookup with one of my friends whos 2 years younger than me...and a year younger than her...she said no

1. bc shes with me

2. bc hes too young...

then my "friend"...tried to get with her saying hes a year older than her...

honestly...the only reason ive never kicked his *** before is bc shed get mad at me about it...

but im about to say **** it and do it anyways...

how long do you think shed be mad? or whats the worst thing shed do?

ok im trying to prove to my girl that i love her right?

i honestly do...she means the world to me...but about 3 weeks ago...me and her kinda...crushed eachother...i was trying to move on and wouuldnt talk to her and told her i didnt wanna talk bc i wanted to get over her...

she didnt seem to care...it crushed me...

apparently she was acting like she didnt care but was actually balling her eyes out at my friends...

honestly...she means the world to me and i felt like such a huge dick...

i ended up talking to her...then one day...i got her flowers and wrote this poem in a card right?

apparently she loved it...

then i bought her this necklace with a heart and wrote a note with it...

apparently she loved that as well...

i have a few other ideas but im starting to run out...

whatre some things i can do without redoing anything ive already done? or anything im gonna do soon....

id write what they are but...idk maybe ima bit TOO paranoid but...if she sees this...

i dont want her knowing what im about to do lol

well....me and my girl wanna try it just ONCE...and i talked to two of my good friends about it and..idk if i wanna do it anymore...or want her to do it...

what happens? or whats ur aspect on it?

ok so im getting my girl flowers and writing this on a card and giving them to her...

i already told her the 1st 2 lines and she thought it was cute :)

i love you more than words can say,

i love you more with every day,

with every breath it's more sincere,

with every thought it becomes more clear,

i asked for a flower i got a few,

i asked for an angel and i got you,

well...feedback? good or no?

ok soooooooo yeah i normally write songs about love and heartbreak and occasionally suicide...anyways...i wanted to throw a curve ball and write one about sex...just raunchy unprotected sex lol

jk about that last part...anyways...its called "Tonights a good night to be bad"

...kinda corny but its what im using...

anyways first off...whats a line i could use thatd rhyme with this line...

"she doesn't even say a thing, she seems to like the abuse"?

its the first line and right now i have this for the first line...

"Woke up today in the mood, to stick it in anything that moves"

but honestly...i think its lame and want ideas for a new line for that

ideas plz?

ok so ive been writing this song in class today...its VERY personal to whats been going on in my life lately...and each name or pet name i use is for a different person...so its like alotta small stories in one song...but i need help with the chorus...or maybe just advice on how to sing it...also when i use a "_" that means i havent written anything for that part yet

verse1

mother, I'm sorry i have wronged,

so many secrets, hidden in this song,

you forgive me, for all I've ever done,

just remember that, I'm not your only son,

verse 2

Baby, it'll all be ok,

if you don't want me, I guess i'll go away,

please tell me, do you miss me at all?

or do you gain pleasure, watching me stumble and fall?

verse 3

lovely, you'll be just fine,

you'll find the pain disappears, just give it time,

don't do anything, too rash or insane,

you're just in a bad place, you're not to blame,

verse 4

sweetie, i'm sorry for your hurt,

you didn't deserve it, I was such a jerk,

I should've showed you, that this is not the way,

I need to hear you, You need to hear me say!

Chorus

I won't play these, games anymore,

effects of a broken heart, leave me face down on the floor,

___________________________

___________________________

verse 5

ally, please show me the way,

i'm so lost without her, I can't make it through the day,

bring me up, as self destruction ensues,

I know i'll make it, this time i won't lose,

verse 6

hey girl, you're so pretty,

I know times are rough, but soon you will see,

that i'll be your friend, we can make it through,

there's only one thing, i know i must do!

*chorus*

...thats all i have so far...i know its reallllllllllllllllllllllly long but its personal to my life and i mean...stairway to heaven's like...8 minutes long so whatever lol but lemme know what you think...or any advice?

ok so i wrote this song about a week ago...

its about my cheating ex gf....

tell me what you think...

verse 1

the rain is sinking in,

her hearts bleeding sin,

please erase, that guilty look from your face,

why can't you look at me?

is it because you know i see?

through everything you say,

it's too late to say your sorry...

Chorus

How could i believe?

when you said we're meant to be?

now i hope you see, i'm surviving,

I wish i could've read,

everything that you said,

I wish i would have known, before it all went down,

Verse 2

I think we're making up,

right before we're breaking up,

I don't think you even gave us a chance,

What are we fighting for?

It seems that he means more,

I wish i could have said,

THE RIGHT THING!

*chorus*

Bridge

I'm drowning in the flood,

It seems i've had enough,

Of the feelings rising up in me,

You've got me on my knees,

Begging you to please,

Release me, release me

*chorus*

ok so i posted something earlier asking for ideas for a chorus...well...its done and i wanna know what people think

Verse 1:

sitting in silence, lost in a thought,

trying to survive another sleepless night,

no miles can separate us, as the search carries on,

I miss your eyes, I'm lost in their spell,

Dreams keep me going when all is not well,

Heaven's missing an angel, from what i can tell,

Chorus:

and i'll follow you till the end,

of my heart's last stand,

and when the fire burns out and dies,

or in your darkest night,

i'll be there,

i'll be there,

Verse 2:

Sweet is the signal lighting my life,

Sweet is the perfection that lights up the night,

Come closer, as i need you by my side,

My heart is a mystery, you hold the Key,

You are so beautiful, I want you to see,

Just how much, you mean to me,

Chorus:

and I'll follow you till the end,

Of my heart's last stand,

and when the fire burns out and dies,

or in your darkest night,

I'll be there,

I'll be there,

ok i MIGHT be adding in a bridge to that too...i don't know yet...but lemme know what you think...THANX!!!

ok so i normally play really heavy stuff but i want this to be more acoustic and softer...tell me what you think...or any ideas

verse 1

sitting in silence,lost in a thought,

trying to survive another sleepless night,

no miles can separate us as the search carries on,

I miss your eyes, i'm lost in their spell,

dreams keep me going when all is not well,

heaven's missing an angel from what i can see,

*chorus*

Verse 2

sweet is that signal lighting my life,

sweet is the perfection that lights up the night,

come closer as i need you by my side,

*chorus*

im getting tired of having to switch it on the amp...any ideas? would help if its somewhat cheap but ill get whatever

how much could i sell yugioh cards for?

ok so i have the 1st 150 pokemon cards from the 1st season...and i have more than 1 of most of them....

i also have quite a few of the second season...

im in need of some money and wanna sell these on ebay

altogether...how much do you think i can get if i sell each 1 seperately?

ok so with the holidays....also comes a longgggggggg list of bills...long story short...ill need a good $1000 by christmas...

and ill need another 1250 after christmas for a guitar pedal and to record an album....

anyways whatre some good ideas on how to make money fast?

i get paid about 150 a week but..

1. i like to have fun on the weekends

2. thats just not enough

any ideas? i dont mind working my *** off i just want it to get me somewhere

ok so ive got alotta songs im gonna record...i play guitar and sing...and im looking to record an acoustic album or demo for now...

i have a band coming out soon and ive got even more and better songs electric wise...

how can i record? other than buying my own stuff...i have the recording software but i dont have the proper computer for it...and i wanna make an actual decent album...

can i rent a studio? if so how much? and for how long? or do i have to know some1 with a studio?

im trying to decide on a present to get my gf...any ideas?

ok so me and my gf broke up a few days ago right?

well we broke up to be friends and still kiss and what not but we wanted to get to know each other better...

anyways...while we were dating...i couldnt ever tell her y i liked or loved her...idk y...i just couldnt...

and heres my plan but im worried it may be a bit much...

i wanna get her a thing of roses...and replace 1 rose with a fake 1...then i want to get her a sweet card...write that im sorry that i couldnt ever tell her y i loved her...and say something like "ill love you until the last rose dies" (make sense?...the fake rose wont die lol)...then i want to put a longgggggggg hand written list of things i love about her inside the card on a seperate folded piece of paper...

is this a good idea? or is it too much or too cheesy or whatever?

ok well...i smoke cigs right?

anyways i recently started chain smoking...ALOT!!!!

like...8 cigs in a row....anyways i tried to go one day without it...its literally impossible...

im trying to quit but the withdrawel is killing me...any ideas as to how i can keep my mind off of it while i get the nicotine outta my system?

ok so im 17 right?

i workout excessively

i do smoke weed a bit

and i smoke cigarrettes

...normally im a really "emotional" person,

not like pussy emotional i just tend to care about people alot

sometimes even more than i should

but lately...i haven't felt any emotion about anything...even my gf...

yes i love her but...idk

anyways i was talking to an ex of mine and she told me that my antidepressants might be whatre doing this...im taking them to help me with my anxiety but if thats whats causing it...i dont know what i should do...any ideas?