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I would like to know what is the name of this flower.. http://s1310.photobucket.com/user/amicas36/media/i...

TAKE THE TIME

You may think that that I have locked

myself from the world that's outside of my door,

I just want you to know that you are so wrong,

nobody is gonna take me as a prissoner,

not even for love, you took your

chances but i'm here to prove you wrong,

i just want to take some time to settle my mind.

I will break the walls on my own,

cause they arent able to contain what i feel inside of me,

how could you leave me to fall with nothing to hold on?

I was hoping that you would come and save me from my

fatal fall, i kept waiting in vain and the love slowly disapeared,

Take The Time X.2

to think about what you have done,

sometimes we just have to accept that we did wrong before time,

cause some actions without knowing might hurt someone.

so please don't come back saying that your sorry,

cause you turned my heart to stone,

isn't it so funny how everything turns around .

so i havent finished it. ik that it has some grammar mistakes and spelling. but i just wanted your opinion guys. so?

TAKE THE TIME

You may think that that I have locked

myself from the world that's outside of my door,

I just want you to know that you are so wrong,

nobody is gonna take me as a prissoner,

not even for love, you took your

chances but i'm here to prove you wrong,

i just want to take some time to settle my mind.

I will break the walls on my own,

cause they arent able to contain what i feel inside of me,

how could you leave me to fall with nothing to hold on?

I was hoping that you would come and save me from my

fatal fall, i kept waiting in vain and the love slowly disapeared,

Take The Time X.2

to think about what you have done,

sometimes we just have to accept that we did wrong before time,

cause some actions without knowing might hurt someone.

so please don't come back saying that your sorry,

cause you turned my heart to stone,

isn't it so funny how everything turns around .

so i havent finished it. ik that it has some grammar mistakes and spelling. but i just wanted your opinion guys. so?

Sry has Grammar mistakes.. So what do you think? Poem Or Song idk.. It's called REWRITE. its not done, i just wanted some feedback.

Im taking my time to try and write it on paper,

whats so gone but i still remember,

whats written in black is called legal,

all your dirty lies all written in the color of fresh blood.

Im taking steps back in time my mind on rewine,

the dark places where i once crossed with my eyes

blinded my your hands, only your lyrical voice as

my guide suddently seem so alive.

Without control my hands just write,

every feeling that is captured within my heart start to

flow out like the tears that are pouring down from my eyes,

REWRITING every single account that has happened in my life become once again vivid and bright.

In my mind remembering how you tore me apart,

and it becomes harder than i thought,

i took my chance even when they told me that i am going to get hurt, i thought that they where all wrong,

i guess that after all they where right.

So I Just Now Decided to start writing a song/poem aha. so can you please give me your honest feedback on how its coming out? Has some grammar and spelling mistakes i know i will fix them. :) Tanx

Eventhough that your so far away now,

the love i felt for you is still strong like before,

and i dont know what really happened to us,

but some how i kept holding on up to now in learning to let go.

the last words that you said are still inside of my head,

but the memories are the only things that are slowly withering away

out of the blues, and I am trying so hard to contain them inside after all

they are the only things left behind of what once used to be our love.

Now Watching you from far away you standing there with a smile on your face, and it tear me inside to know that once you where mine

but it is no more, wanting to hug you and kiss you hello

and goodbye like before, im missing you so badly and its Breaking my heart even more, im still searching for answers trying to know the reason why everything ended this way.

So my friend wrote this whats ur opinion ur view about it? sry for the spelling mistakes.

We used to be in the same love story,

the one that has now ended,

with chapters still unwriten and the

truth still untold.

Eventhough that time took its course,

and i know that what we once had is no more,

that it has vanished never to return like it was once before.

I'm not able to restart it all over again,

eventhough I try the flame of our love has faded off,

I still keep dwelling in the past, and i know that

it's wrong, but my heart keeps telling me that's right.

I'm still holding on to the memories that have not died,

the once that are still alive, hiding inside of whats left

of my heart.

But i keep falling all over again and i don't want

to keep living on like this a fairytail, that seems

nevending, that is just inside of my mind.

I need to accept the truth now that your gone,

you are never to return to my arms,

you where the first to take a hold of my heart you

knew it but you still left it to fall.

Broken into pieces now here i stand,

so why do i keep crying for something that isn't worth

fighting for anymore? I need to get inside of my mind

that you are unreachable, the war between myself needs

to come to an end, i should stop pretending that i dont care

if i realy do, I'm the only one that is getting all of the pain.

So i just wrote this, sry if it has Spelling/Grammar mistakes. How does it sound? like a poem or song, its not yet finished. its suppose 2 be a song do.lol a slow kinda intense song.. I just wanted some feedback on my progress. Thanx for your time.

Every single day that goes by i can feel this feelings inside of my heart becoming stronger and stronger,

i know that i can't buy your love,

because there is no amount of money that can buy such a special person like you,

i know im not perfect but i can try to be only for you.

I just want to make you happy when your sad,

because i hate to see you cry, you don't deserve

to shed anymore tears for people that aren't worth it,

i know your past how you got hurt,

but don't be afraid its already so long gone,

just open your heart to me give me a chance and i will show you how real love can truely be.

No more questiong, i can see in your eyes that you are afraid, just hold my hands together you and I will walk trough the struggles of life,

my heart wants you i dont knw why,

your such a wonderful person and i promise you that i wount hurt you.

So i just wrote this, sry if it has Spelling/Grammar mistakes. How does it sound? like a poem or song, its not yet finished. its suppose 2 be a song do.lol a slow kinda intense song.. I just wanted some feedback on my progress. Thanx for your time.

Every single day that goes by i can feel this feelings inside of my heart becoming stronger and stronger,

i know that i can't buy your love,

because there is no amount of money that can buy such a special person like you,

i know im not perfect but i can try to be only for you.

I just want to make you happy when your sad,

because i hate to see you cry, you don't deserve

to shed anymore tears for people that aren't worth it,

i know your past how you got hurt,

but don't be afraid its already so long gone,

just open your heart to me give me a chance and i will show you how real love can truely be.

No more questiong, i can see in your eyes that you are afraid, just hold my hands together you and I will walk trough the struggles of life,

my heart wants you i dont knw why,

your such a wonderful person and i promise you that i wount hurt you.

-Forget The Rest-

If I knew the truth, I would be happy,

everything would become alright, I dont really

give a dam about the rest of the world, all I really care is that you

stay by my side.

In this life we have to fight for what we want,

so baby I will fight for you until the end of time,

until I give my last breath, I will be your soldier

I will fight for your love, I want to be the one who

will keep you warm on cold nights.

Don't want to say goodbye

its to early to give up on everything the two of us

have passed trough.

Forget the past, forget the pain, forget every person

that has broken your heart, everything is now in the past

look towards the future, take my hand let's write just the two

of us the story of our lives.

Let's escape the reality of this life at least

just for a little while, make me feel like if im flying high

up in the sky.

Oh dont want to let go off you,

you have become a part of me, you are the song

that keeps repeating inside of my mind followed

by the beat of my heart, You make me smile

every time you pass by forget the rest,

just the two of us living our lives

I never want this to end.

In this life we have to fight for what we want,

so baby I will fight for you until the end of time,

until I give my last breath, I will be your soldier

I will fight for your love, I want to be the one who

will keep you warm on cold nights.

Remember our first kiss, when I took your

hand and placed it over my chest how my heart

was beating fast, and I told you that happens

when i'm around you, you smiled.

I still remember that day, and I promise that I will never forget,

Dont be afraid I will not hurt you,

you know how much I love you.

So what do you think? its a slow song. Rate it out of 10. pls and tanx for your time.

-Forget The Rest-

If I knew the truth, I would be happy,

everything would become alright, I dont really

give a dam about the rest of the world, all I really care is that you

stay by my side.

In this life we have to fight for what we want,

so baby I will fight for you until the end of time,

until I give my last breath, I will be your soldier

I will fight for your love, I want to be the one who

will keep you warm on cold nights.

Don't want to say goodbye

its to early to give up on everything the two of us

have passed trough.

Forget the past, forget the pain, forget every person

that has broken your heart, everything is now in the past

look towards the future, take my hand let's write just the two

of us the story of our lives.

Let's escape the reality of this life at least

just for a little while, make me feel like if im flying high

up in the sky.

Oh dont want to let go off you,

you have become a part of me, you are the song

that keeps repeating inside of my mind followed

by the beat of my heart, You make me smile

every time you pass by forget the rest,

just the two of us living our lives

I never want this to end.

In this life we have to fight for what we want,

so baby I will fight for you until the end of time,

until I give my last breath, I will be your soldier

I will fight for your love, I want to be the one who

will keep you warm on cold nights.

Remember our first kiss, when I took your

hand and placed it over my chest how my heart

was beating fast, and I told you that happens

when i'm around you, you smiled.

I still remember that day, and I promise that I will never forget,

Dont be afraid I will not hurt you,

you know how much I love you.

So what do you think? its a slow song. Rate it out of 10. pls and tanx for your time.

so i just wrote this sorry if i looks like a poem. Tell me what you think is it good? i like writing by the way, im a 15 yrs old dude. It's a slow song like with piano. --Cannot Find A Way--

You make me cry you now I suffer

when you treat me this way, I know

you got hurt in many ways from every

thing you have told me, I could give everything

to show you that i'm not like every one else.

I can see your pain, I can see the trouble you

have giving your heart to someone else,

you cannot find a way just follow your heart,

You will know what's best for you,

although I dont want to get hurt but if i

have to say goodbye just for you to be happy

then I accept the reality of life.

You made me smile all this time I will never

forget you, I made decisions that where not the

best for us, i'm not a saint I know I just want to go back

in time to the fist time I say you.

so i just wrote this sorry if i looks like a poem. Tell me what you think is it good? i like writing by the way. --Cannot Find A Way--

You make me cry you now I suffer

when you treat me this way, I know

you got hurt in many ways from every

thing you have told me, I could give everything

to show you that i'm not like every one else.

I can see your pain, I can see the trouble you

have giving your heart to someone else,

you cannot find a way just follow your heart,

You will know what's best for you,

although I dont want to get hurt but if i

have to say goodbye just for you to be happy

then I accept the reality of life.

You made me smile all this time I will never

forget you, I made decisions that where not the

best for us, i'm not a saint I know I just want to go back

in time to the fist time I say you.

By the way i'm a 15 year old boy. I love 2 sing and i tried 2 do this. what notes am i hitting or is it in the whistle register?? any advice and i'm new 2 this i'm still learning. sry i just went with random pictures..http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MI876jBPlss&feature...

By the way i'm a 15 year old boy. I love 2 sing and i tried 2 do this. what notes am i hitting or is it in the whistle register?? any advice and i'm new 2 this i'm still learning. sry i just went with random pictures..http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MI876jBPlss&feature...

By the way i'm a 15 year old boy. I love 2 sing and i tried 2 do this what notes am i hitting or is it in the whistle register?? any advice and i'm new 2 this i'm still learning. sry i just went with random pictures..http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MI876jBPlss&feature...

By the way i'm a 15 year old boy. I love 2 sing and i tried 2 do this what notes am i hitting or is it in the whistle register?? any advice and i'm new 2 this i'm still learning. sry i just went with random pictures..http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MI876jBPlss&feature...

So i wrote it last night so sorry if it has selling mistakes i haven't checked it..

its like a ballad song.

-Hello Or Goodbye My Love-

I’m thinking of you every second of this dark night,

Is it wrong to love you or ours is meant to be.

I thought that this feelings rite here inside my heart

Where right, that our love was true, but now baby I’m

All confused and lost. Is it all an illusion.

Why do you treat me this way?

Did I did something wrong?

You know that I wouldn’t hurt you,

and that you are my everything in this life

So please tell me the truth do you love me yes or no?

Would it be Hello Or Goodbye My Love.

Don’t break my heart, don’t make me cry for you tonight,

I guess that my heart was wrong I got carried away

I’m too much of a dreamer, I was floating on my own

Cloud now it’s time to land to the reality of the world.

I will remember you forever you where

the fist to steal my heart, I will keep those memories of love

inside my heart and keep moving on all alone in this

world. I could give my all to be with you, but you can’t seem

To understand me, why do you doubt me?

Oh oh oh.

Haven’t I shown you that I’m not lying and that that

Im saying the truth. So will it be Hello Or Goodbye My Love.

So i wrote it last night so sorry if it has selling mistakes i haven't checked it..

its like a ballad song.

-Hello Or Goodbye My Love-

I’m thinking of you every second of this dark night,

Is it wrong to love you or ours is meant to be.

I thought that this feelings rite here inside my heart

Where right, that our love was true, but now baby I’m

All confused and lost. Is it all an illusion.

Why do you treat me this way?

Did I did something wrong?

You know that I wouldn’t hurt you,

and that you are my everything in this life

So please tell me the truth do you love me yes or no?

Would it be Hello Or Goodbye My Love.

Don’t break my heart, don’t make me cry for you tonight,

I guess that my heart was wrong I got carried away

I’m too much of a dreamer, I was floating on my own

Cloud now it’s time to land to the reality of the world.

I will remember you forever you where

the fist to steal my heart, I will keep those memories of love

inside my heart and keep moving on all alone in this

world. I could give my all to be with you, but you can’t seem

To understand me, why do you doubt me?

Oh oh oh.

Haven’t I shown you that I’m not lying and that that

Im saying the truth. So will it be Hello Or Goodbye My Love.

So i wrote it last night so sorry if it has selling mistakes i haven't checked it..

its like a ballad song.

-Hello Or Goodbye My Love-

I’m thinking of you every second of this dark night,

Is it wrong to love you or ours is meant to be.

I thought that this feelings rite here inside my heart

Where right, that our love was true, but now baby I’m

All confused and lost. Is it all an illusion.

Why do you treat me this way?

Did I did something wrong?

You know that I wouldn’t hurt you,

and that you are my everything in this life

So please tell me the truth do you love me yes or no?

Would it be Hello Or Goodbye My Love.

Don’t break my heart, don’t make me cry for you tonight,

I guess that my heart was wrong I got carried away

I’m too much of a dreamer, I was floating on my own

Cloud now it’s time to land to the reality of the world.

I will remember you forever you where

the fist to steal my heart, I will keep those memories of love

inside my heart and keep moving on all alone in this

world. I could give my all to be with you, but you can’t seem

To understand me, why do you doubt me?

Oh oh oh.

Haven’t I shown you that I’m not lying and that that

Im saying the truth. So will it be Hello Or Goodbye My Love.

So i wrote it last night so sorry if it has selling mistakes i haven't checked it..

its like a ballad song.

Hello Or Goodbye My Love

I’m thinking of you every second of this dark night,

Is it wrong to love you or ours is meant to be.

I thought that this feelings rite here inside my heart

Where right, that our love was true, but now baby I’m

All confused and lost. Is it all an illusion.

Why do you treat me this way?

Did I did something wrong?

You know that I wouldn’t hurt you,

and that you are my everything in this life

So please tell me the truth do you love me yes or no?

Would it be Hello Or Goodbye My Love.

Don’t break my heart, don’t make me cry for you tonight,

I guess that my heart was wrong I got carried away

I’m too much of a dreamer, I was floating on my own

Cloud now it’s time to land to the reality of the world.

I will remember you forever you where

the fist to steal my heart, I will keep those memories of love

inside my heart and keep moving on all alone in this

world. I could give my all to be with you, but you can’t seem

To understand me, why do you doubt me?

Oh oh oh.

Haven’t I shown you that I’m not lying and that that

Im saying the truth. So will it be Hello Or Goodbye My Love.