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  • What do you think of my poem?

    What is this new promise

    I can ask worse questions

    But I can't think

    Everything should feel right

    Not that it was me

    I fell from grace

    Should I make it easier on you

    What would it take

    I'm past my prime

    5 AnswersPoetry10 years ago
  • What do you think of my poem?

    If you ever was who I know you are

    You will be eternally seething in your hatred

    So much that you wish corruption upon everyone

    It would seem to be my best interest

    You must like it

    I know you would want it back

    Your glorious work and your sated dreams

    Destruction would like your name

    You should call me

    So much

    I can help you

    So much

    3 AnswersPoetry10 years ago
  • What do you think of my poem?

    Through the wet winds

    Higher then the stones in the waves

    So much higher then the waves

    I stand alone

    I am nobody

    I have no one

    There are many who live this way

    I know everything

    Should it come to me

    I would circle high

    Would be an Eagle

    Like a bird single and soaring

    I know your name

    I hear it whispering in the wind

    It lives in mist

    In a haze

    If you must tell me something

    I would not call you

    I cannot live in your name

    It is most foul and festered

    5 AnswersPoetry10 years ago
  • What do you think of my poem?

    Oddly enough I couldn't do it

    It was almost gross and especially

    Everything else is pale

    It was only this I was afraid of

    I must say

    Could it have been easier

    Could it master the wave

    Drowning in the tides

    Maybe if there was a surfboard

    If there was fresh surf

    Ploughing the oceans

    With stars high above

    However I must only confess

    This is what happened

    Could it have been likely

    Do you feel that it is really prose?

    3 AnswersPoetry10 years ago
  • What do you think of my poem?

    I was not obviously elated

    I must have possibly revealed no answer

    I act of my own opportunity

    Just like the eternity from which between comes prayer

    To me it is other worldly

    It is God like and pure

    A coming of wisdom and temple

    Of the flesh

    Old women tell you this either from memory

    Or from celestial scape

    Told eons of a toiling womb

    And of secrets we all pen

    Intonations you can flutter like the wings of a butterfly

    Witness everything of defilement in the storming thunder

    Such is the organ wound throughout the world

    Throughout the universe and in all wills

    I have too much despair

    Like the silence that I must unearth

    Here in some time the last woven

    A soul that is flawed

    7 AnswersPoetry10 years ago
  • What do you think of my poem?

    I was not obviously elated

    I must have possibly revealed no answer

    I act of my own opportunity

    Just like the eternity from which between comes prayer

    To me it is other worldly

    It is God like and pure

    A coming of wisdom and temple

    Of the flesh

    Old women tell you this either from memory

    Or from celestial scape

    Told eons of a toiling womb

    In distances where oblivion assembles

    Intonations you can flutter like the wings of a butterfly

    Witness everything of defilement in the storming thunder

    Such is the organ wound throughout the world

    Throughout the universe and in all wills

    2 AnswersPoetry10 years ago
  • What do you think of my poem?

    Unforgiving is the world

    Like a single position regarding reality

    It is like order but it is like no thought

    Chaos is circular it can circle

    Directions under vast skies yield as dimensions

    Ride the gathering storms

    Jealous in the cathedrals of chaos

    High is the dethroned God

    Blindness too much like this

    Wraps the vision by hiding

    And the intent is like more sorry

    Bottled to all

    1 AnswerPoetry10 years ago
  • What do you think of my poem?

    Unforgiving is the world

    Like a single position regarding reality

    It is like order but it is like no thought

    Chaos is circular it can circle

    Directions under vast skies yield as dimensions

    Ride the gathering storms

    Jealous in the cathedrals of chaos

    So high is the dethroned God

    Bitter wisdom is like a girl

    She likes your smile

    Without a doubt you know her

    So you got everything

    1 AnswerPoetry10 years ago
  • What do you think of my poem?

    So that I have now lost

    It all has been really pivotal

    Focus everywhere crashes

    Without trying first to wet the shore

    Thoughts work in the stillness

    Returning to some place

    Here in the present

    Words that whisper too much

    If there ever has been reason

    Then it must have evolved

    Either so much

    Or in the utter water

    2 AnswersPoetry10 years ago
  • How is this poem to you?

    Lie to me

    It is color

    I like to color

    With everyone

    Lies and fictions

    Colors and interconnections

    Or these lies

    So as within reflection

    2 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago
  • What do you think of my poem?

    Under the morning light was a dreamy like pasture from which the cows downed fermented nectar like honey so that they could plow the fields vainly cattle like and reflected from green grass. She interconnected the fast moving reverence of the beasts vainly dreaming of the collections they rescued from the sleepy fields to the color of the fading dawn. Like dreams.

    Green dreams.

    For everyday there forms a new reflection. The All Core greets the new colors with evolutionary algorithms. Colors that reveal the intricate links in the All Space, veiling the coming seconds that they listen to the dreams coming before they react, in color, in dreams.

    Felt.

    Sleep. Remembered. Fit. Color. And more that it comes to live vast, rising like the tides of a coast greeting the ocean. However dreams do come from somewhere. Come to dream in color. And cattle. Her dream is. Viral revealing the snakes of fire that circle slithering down the coils of beasts and revolve to eternal sleep.

    Still.

    Sit so that everyday would please me to come between the colors of the coils that wrap around the world relenting to the darknesses of revelations. Come that revelations veil riddles that lie revealing between the color and the darkness that stillness that dreams from circles wound iterating positions revolved in evolutionary accidents crashing through the green fields like bovine demons goring the flesh of cows at free hand.

    Lost dreams.

    Form is like a song. A song that is like pouring rain. Rain like smell flowering scintillating from veins crashing between scenes that in fantasy could let sensations steal presences rolling in the Form Scape. So like form as clear in the flesh is color that in dreams lives engaging in stealing the promises crashing in the scent like thunder.

    The light is now from fire.

    In Helios like slick plasma flaming to color the All Space. In the dreams of the Titans. In me. I am the sun god.

    I am Hyperion.

    No man is not made in life bitten dithering so that in life he is pictured in pattern like a chromal reflection forming a render of the isochromatic infactuation of emergence fractral like a color in sentience evolving from action varying in form becoming action in viral objectivity.

    And more that he is colored by night is he cast to shadow the lost altern dictioned in return from evolving algorithms in dreams so come the scatter of sentience free in the slipstream of involuntary code.

    Fire is light. Light is color. Color becomes the night. Green life. Green like the fields cattle like. And there are some cattle that have sent leads battered in return between reasons. Her cattle graze like some life could live, play at omniscience. Color. I am.

    2 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago
  • What do you think of my poem?

    Is there some dream

    In this

    Like a color that is dreamed

    Like that

    In the sun god

    Like a fire

    Burning in skies

    And lives

    3 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago
  • What do you think of this poem?

    Under the morning light was a dreamy like pasture from which the cows downed fermented nectar like honey so that they could plow the fields vainly cattle like and reflected from green grass. She interconnected the fast moving reverence of the beasts vainly dreaming of the collections they rescued from the sleepy fields to the color of the fading dawn. Like dreams.

    Green dreams.

    For everyday there forms a new reflection. The All Core greets the new colors with evolutionary algorithms. Colors that reveal the intricate links in the All Space, veiling the coming seconds that they listen to the dreams coming before they react, in color, in dreams.

    Felt.

    Sleep. Remembered. Fit. Color. And more that it comes to live vast, rising like the tides of a coast greeting the ocean. However dreams do come from somewhere. Come to dream in color. And cattle. Her dream is. Viral revealing the snakes of fire that circle slithering down the coils of beasts and revolve to eternal sleep.

    Still.

    Sit so that everyday would please me to come between the colors of the coils that wrap around the world relenting to the darknesses of revelations. Come that revelations veil riddles that lie revealing between the color and the darkness that stillness that dreams from circles wound iterating positions revolved in evolutionary accidents crashing through the green fields like bovine demons goring the flesh of cows at free hand.

    Lost dreams.

    Form is like a song. A song that is like pouring rain. Rain like smell flowering scintillating from veins crashing between scenes that in fantasy could let sensations steal presences rolling in the Form Scape. So like form as clear in the flesh is color that in dreams lives engaging in stealing the promises crashing in the scent like thunder.

    The light is now from fire.

    In Helios like slick plasma flaming to color the All Space. In the dreams of the Titans. In me. I am the sun god.

    I am Hyperion.

    No man is not made in life bitten dithering so that in life he is pictured in pattern like a chromal reflection forming a render of the isochromatic infactuation of emergence fractral like a color in sentience evolving from action varying in form becoming action in viral objectivity.

    And more that he is colored by night is he cast to shadow the lost altern dictioned in return from evolving algorithms in dreams so come the scatter of sentience free in the slipstream of involuntary code.

    Fire is light. Light is color. Color becomes the night. Green life. Green like the fields cattle like. And there are some cattle that has sent leads battered in return between reasons. Like Apollo. His cattle graze like some life could live, play at omniscience. Apollo the sun god. And like him, I too am a chariot of fire. A sun god. A color of the archer. Color. I am.

    1 AnswerPoetry1 decade ago
  • Who likes this poem, Please tell me?

    Colors in my eyes

    I can see them

    Like stings

    A bee like sting

    In the scatter of color

    In the darkness of color

    In the scent of color

    And like you

    In you I can light the sky

    In the sky

    I track alight

    Fine light

    Reason veils it like a color

    Not the color

    In your eyes

    Everything

    Faster then light

    Higher then the sky

    Words that seem

    In your eyes

    6 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago
  • What is my poem like?

    Colors in my eyes

    I can see them

    Like stings

    A bee like sting

    In the scatter of color

    In the darkness of color

    In the scent of color

    And like you

    In you I can light the sky

    In the sky

    I track alight

    Fine light

    Reason veils it like a color

    Not the color

    In your eyes

    Everything

    Faster then light

    Light is never the leash

    Here is light

    In your eyes

    2 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago
  • What is your opinion of my poem?

    Color in my eyes

    I seem to like them

    I can see them

    In engaging the world

    Night is black

    Night is dark

    Like color is both

    So much in there

    That is night

    In night is dark

    Dark like black color

    Is how light is seen

    How that is so

    Is like data

    Like that color is

    Coming expressed by resonants

    Black is that little color that absorbs

    And white is matterial expression

    Darkness is color that is blend

    And the night is mysterious that it echoes

    7 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago
  • What is you opinion of my poem?

    Gather around

    I have a tale

    Intimate

    Like love

    Wet in the rain

    Sloshing by

    In the stinging drops

    Of water

    When I was a youth

    Now that I am not

    I lived like the wind

    Slowing down but never still

    I had flesh like the Devil

    And lived like hollow men

    Dreaming of visions

    Like the flowers of glory

    When I let echo

    I heard the recursion

    Evolution

    She lived in reminiscence

    4 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago
  • But if you like my poem?

    The fire is alive

    It is burning

    Like life, during prayers

    In midnight dark

    I can feel the flames

    They are winding

    Processes wired to render under eternity

    The Ascension of Swashbuckler

    4 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago
  • What do you think of my poem?

    Said so I did

    I said to you what is this

    Is this fukcing or what

    I think so

    I remember it

    So fukcing

    Is it this life

    Is it a life

    This is reality

    It is very real

    I think so

    So I said

    6 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago