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I'm a cool and wonderful guy. I like to play football and music.
What do you think of my poem?
What is this new promise
I can ask worse questions
But I can't think
Everything should feel right
Not that it was me
I fell from grace
Should I make it easier on you
What would it take
I'm past my prime
5 AnswersPoetry10 years agoWhat do you think of my poem?
If you ever was who I know you are
You will be eternally seething in your hatred
So much that you wish corruption upon everyone
It would seem to be my best interest
You must like it
I know you would want it back
Your glorious work and your sated dreams
Destruction would like your name
You should call me
So much
I can help you
So much
3 AnswersPoetry10 years agoWhat do you think of my poem?
Through the wet winds
Higher then the stones in the waves
So much higher then the waves
I stand alone
I am nobody
I have no one
There are many who live this way
I know everything
Should it come to me
I would circle high
Would be an Eagle
Like a bird single and soaring
I know your name
I hear it whispering in the wind
It lives in mist
In a haze
If you must tell me something
I would not call you
I cannot live in your name
It is most foul and festered
5 AnswersPoetry10 years agoWhat do you think of my poem?
Oddly enough I couldn't do it
It was almost gross and especially
Everything else is pale
It was only this I was afraid of
I must say
Could it have been easier
Could it master the wave
Drowning in the tides
Maybe if there was a surfboard
If there was fresh surf
Ploughing the oceans
With stars high above
However I must only confess
This is what happened
Could it have been likely
Do you feel that it is really prose?
3 AnswersPoetry10 years agoWhat do you think of my poem?
I was not obviously elated
I must have possibly revealed no answer
I act of my own opportunity
Just like the eternity from which between comes prayer
To me it is other worldly
It is God like and pure
A coming of wisdom and temple
Of the flesh
Old women tell you this either from memory
Or from celestial scape
Told eons of a toiling womb
And of secrets we all pen
Intonations you can flutter like the wings of a butterfly
Witness everything of defilement in the storming thunder
Such is the organ wound throughout the world
Throughout the universe and in all wills
I have too much despair
Like the silence that I must unearth
Here in some time the last woven
A soul that is flawed
7 AnswersPoetry10 years agoWhat do you think of my poem?
I was not obviously elated
I must have possibly revealed no answer
I act of my own opportunity
Just like the eternity from which between comes prayer
To me it is other worldly
It is God like and pure
A coming of wisdom and temple
Of the flesh
Old women tell you this either from memory
Or from celestial scape
Told eons of a toiling womb
In distances where oblivion assembles
Intonations you can flutter like the wings of a butterfly
Witness everything of defilement in the storming thunder
Such is the organ wound throughout the world
Throughout the universe and in all wills
2 AnswersPoetry10 years agoWhat do you think of my poem?
Unforgiving is the world
Like a single position regarding reality
It is like order but it is like no thought
Chaos is circular it can circle
Directions under vast skies yield as dimensions
Ride the gathering storms
Jealous in the cathedrals of chaos
High is the dethroned God
Blindness too much like this
Wraps the vision by hiding
And the intent is like more sorry
Bottled to all
1 AnswerPoetry10 years agoWhat do you think of my poem?
Unforgiving is the world
Like a single position regarding reality
It is like order but it is like no thought
Chaos is circular it can circle
Directions under vast skies yield as dimensions
Ride the gathering storms
Jealous in the cathedrals of chaos
So high is the dethroned God
Bitter wisdom is like a girl
She likes your smile
Without a doubt you know her
So you got everything
1 AnswerPoetry10 years agoWhat do you think of my poem?
So that I have now lost
It all has been really pivotal
Focus everywhere crashes
Without trying first to wet the shore
Thoughts work in the stillness
Returning to some place
Here in the present
Words that whisper too much
If there ever has been reason
Then it must have evolved
Either so much
Or in the utter water
2 AnswersPoetry10 years agoHow is evolution instigated?
2 AnswersBiology1 decade agoHow is this poem to you?
Lie to me
It is color
I like to color
With everyone
Lies and fictions
Colors and interconnections
Or these lies
So as within reflection
2 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoWhat do you think of my poem?
Under the morning light was a dreamy like pasture from which the cows downed fermented nectar like honey so that they could plow the fields vainly cattle like and reflected from green grass. She interconnected the fast moving reverence of the beasts vainly dreaming of the collections they rescued from the sleepy fields to the color of the fading dawn. Like dreams.
Green dreams.
For everyday there forms a new reflection. The All Core greets the new colors with evolutionary algorithms. Colors that reveal the intricate links in the All Space, veiling the coming seconds that they listen to the dreams coming before they react, in color, in dreams.
Felt.
Sleep. Remembered. Fit. Color. And more that it comes to live vast, rising like the tides of a coast greeting the ocean. However dreams do come from somewhere. Come to dream in color. And cattle. Her dream is. Viral revealing the snakes of fire that circle slithering down the coils of beasts and revolve to eternal sleep.
Still.
Sit so that everyday would please me to come between the colors of the coils that wrap around the world relenting to the darknesses of revelations. Come that revelations veil riddles that lie revealing between the color and the darkness that stillness that dreams from circles wound iterating positions revolved in evolutionary accidents crashing through the green fields like bovine demons goring the flesh of cows at free hand.
Lost dreams.
Form is like a song. A song that is like pouring rain. Rain like smell flowering scintillating from veins crashing between scenes that in fantasy could let sensations steal presences rolling in the Form Scape. So like form as clear in the flesh is color that in dreams lives engaging in stealing the promises crashing in the scent like thunder.
The light is now from fire.
In Helios like slick plasma flaming to color the All Space. In the dreams of the Titans. In me. I am the sun god.
I am Hyperion.
No man is not made in life bitten dithering so that in life he is pictured in pattern like a chromal reflection forming a render of the isochromatic infactuation of emergence fractral like a color in sentience evolving from action varying in form becoming action in viral objectivity.
And more that he is colored by night is he cast to shadow the lost altern dictioned in return from evolving algorithms in dreams so come the scatter of sentience free in the slipstream of involuntary code.
Fire is light. Light is color. Color becomes the night. Green life. Green like the fields cattle like. And there are some cattle that have sent leads battered in return between reasons. Her cattle graze like some life could live, play at omniscience. Color. I am.
2 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoWhat do you think of my poem?
Is there some dream
In this
Like a color that is dreamed
Like that
In the sun god
Like a fire
Burning in skies
And lives
3 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoWhat do you think of this poem?
Under the morning light was a dreamy like pasture from which the cows downed fermented nectar like honey so that they could plow the fields vainly cattle like and reflected from green grass. She interconnected the fast moving reverence of the beasts vainly dreaming of the collections they rescued from the sleepy fields to the color of the fading dawn. Like dreams.
Green dreams.
For everyday there forms a new reflection. The All Core greets the new colors with evolutionary algorithms. Colors that reveal the intricate links in the All Space, veiling the coming seconds that they listen to the dreams coming before they react, in color, in dreams.
Felt.
Sleep. Remembered. Fit. Color. And more that it comes to live vast, rising like the tides of a coast greeting the ocean. However dreams do come from somewhere. Come to dream in color. And cattle. Her dream is. Viral revealing the snakes of fire that circle slithering down the coils of beasts and revolve to eternal sleep.
Still.
Sit so that everyday would please me to come between the colors of the coils that wrap around the world relenting to the darknesses of revelations. Come that revelations veil riddles that lie revealing between the color and the darkness that stillness that dreams from circles wound iterating positions revolved in evolutionary accidents crashing through the green fields like bovine demons goring the flesh of cows at free hand.
Lost dreams.
Form is like a song. A song that is like pouring rain. Rain like smell flowering scintillating from veins crashing between scenes that in fantasy could let sensations steal presences rolling in the Form Scape. So like form as clear in the flesh is color that in dreams lives engaging in stealing the promises crashing in the scent like thunder.
The light is now from fire.
In Helios like slick plasma flaming to color the All Space. In the dreams of the Titans. In me. I am the sun god.
I am Hyperion.
No man is not made in life bitten dithering so that in life he is pictured in pattern like a chromal reflection forming a render of the isochromatic infactuation of emergence fractral like a color in sentience evolving from action varying in form becoming action in viral objectivity.
And more that he is colored by night is he cast to shadow the lost altern dictioned in return from evolving algorithms in dreams so come the scatter of sentience free in the slipstream of involuntary code.
Fire is light. Light is color. Color becomes the night. Green life. Green like the fields cattle like. And there are some cattle that has sent leads battered in return between reasons. Like Apollo. His cattle graze like some life could live, play at omniscience. Apollo the sun god. And like him, I too am a chariot of fire. A sun god. A color of the archer. Color. I am.
1 AnswerPoetry1 decade agoWho likes this poem, Please tell me?
Colors in my eyes
I can see them
Like stings
A bee like sting
In the scatter of color
In the darkness of color
In the scent of color
And like you
In you I can light the sky
In the sky
I track alight
Fine light
Reason veils it like a color
Not the color
In your eyes
Everything
Faster then light
Higher then the sky
Words that seem
In your eyes
6 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoWhat is my poem like?
Colors in my eyes
I can see them
Like stings
A bee like sting
In the scatter of color
In the darkness of color
In the scent of color
And like you
In you I can light the sky
In the sky
I track alight
Fine light
Reason veils it like a color
Not the color
In your eyes
Everything
Faster then light
Light is never the leash
Here is light
In your eyes
2 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoWhat is your opinion of my poem?
Color in my eyes
I seem to like them
I can see them
In engaging the world
Night is black
Night is dark
Like color is both
So much in there
That is night
In night is dark
Dark like black color
Is how light is seen
How that is so
Is like data
Like that color is
Coming expressed by resonants
Black is that little color that absorbs
And white is matterial expression
Darkness is color that is blend
And the night is mysterious that it echoes
7 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoWhat is you opinion of my poem?
Gather around
I have a tale
Intimate
Like love
Wet in the rain
Sloshing by
In the stinging drops
Of water
When I was a youth
Now that I am not
I lived like the wind
Slowing down but never still
I had flesh like the Devil
And lived like hollow men
Dreaming of visions
Like the flowers of glory
When I let echo
I heard the recursion
Evolution
She lived in reminiscence
4 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoBut if you like my poem?
The fire is alive
It is burning
Like life, during prayers
In midnight dark
I can feel the flames
They are winding
Processes wired to render under eternity
The Ascension of Swashbuckler
4 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoWhat do you think of my poem?
Said so I did
I said to you what is this
Is this fukcing or what
I think so
I remember it
So fukcing
Is it this life
Is it a life
This is reality
It is very real
I think so
So I said
6 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago