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cleverity
i made a poem. is it any good?
“forever sun-drenched”
Looked at you from across the street,
I was wearing clothes that never fit me.
You wrapped your hair all up in a bun.
It was three a.m. when your love hit me.
It struck me down, like a lightning bolt,
the sidewalk caught me as I fell.
My heart is septic, and someone left it
at the bottom of the well.
Under February snow
you can hear the new life grow,
humming melodies that hover
inches underneath the cover
of their frozen white enclosure.
Close your eyes, I see you:
On a hill, in the dead of winter,
wrapped in sky-blue cotton sheets,
you were sitting with your head up high.
I was lying at your feet.
When I feel that warm rain fall,
I will burst out strong and tall.
Rinse me off.
Eat my flesh.
Bittersweet,
tastes so fresh.
In the wind my skin feels tighter,
next to you the sun shines brighter,
every surface starts to glimmer
with the heated air of summer.
My legs were feeble, and my arms were weak,
but I crawled the whole way through.
I guess the summer never really ended.
It still hurts to think of you.
Way down here, where the grass is thick,
where water runs through the river so quick,
I will wait
still as ice
for the green
of your eyes.
I will wait
until you
love me too.
12 AnswersPoetry1 decade agois this poem i wrote indicative of any real talent?
i wrote it for a school assignment. the assignment was to create a poem called "the beowulf in me" or "the grendel in me" as we're reading beowulf and this is what i came up with. i actually enjoyed writing it but i'm not sure if it's good or just weird. feedback would be greatly appreciated.
"The Beowulf in me"
The Beowulf in me
Comes out late at night
To tear down the sky
With hands big as seas
And wraps it round my sides
Its blackness loose and gaping
Draping down sleek and cool
Wants just to swallow me whole
Next to Beowulf I’m safe
Shielded from the rain and snow
Follow blindly as he goes
Wrapped in bearskin winter clothes
Sword asleep inside a sheath
Made of bones and hair and teeth
From a monster and his mother
Once so wicked, two dead fiends
Face the darkness of their deeds
To sit and wait in dreamless sleep
Steel inside them sharp and clean
I hear him call out
Songs by birds extinct
That echo through halls
Into rooms unseen
Waiting for new life
Thrust from lips pursed tight
Meeting the gray walls
Without resistance
As they are old friends
At the tunnel’s end
Green vines line the walls
Roots grow strong beneath
My bare calloused feet
The air tastes so sweet
In Beowulf’s place
I stand as he stands
Two feet planted firm
And legs stiff as trees
Deep down in the dirt
Down below everything
A place for no man
No creature or song
Could ever here be
Just Beowulf and me
Stars whine quiet and sweet
Dark clouds run down my spine
I hear Beowulf say
Put it back before the day
Leaks soft into night
And shakes you awake
And makes grass grow high
All the children run and hide
From the burning ball of fire
But in his half shut eyes
Teeth so brilliant white
You can feel him smile
Through the coldest night
So I sew up the sky
With my arms made of clay
Morning light fills the air
Glows dull on Beowulf’s hair
Armor shines too bright to see
Him disappear with the breeze
To a gold-encrusted place
Where only Beowulf could be
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2 AnswersXbox1 decade ago