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  • i made a poem. is it any good?

    “forever sun-drenched”

    Looked at you from across the street,

    I was wearing clothes that never fit me.

    You wrapped your hair all up in a bun.

    It was three a.m. when your love hit me.

    It struck me down, like a lightning bolt,

    the sidewalk caught me as I fell.

    My heart is septic, and someone left it

    at the bottom of the well.

    Under February snow

    you can hear the new life grow,

    humming melodies that hover

    inches underneath the cover

    of their frozen white enclosure.

    Close your eyes, I see you:

    On a hill, in the dead of winter,

    wrapped in sky-blue cotton sheets,

    you were sitting with your head up high.

    I was lying at your feet.

    When I feel that warm rain fall,

    I will burst out strong and tall.

    Rinse me off.

    Eat my flesh.

    Bittersweet,

    tastes so fresh.

    In the wind my skin feels tighter,

    next to you the sun shines brighter,

    every surface starts to glimmer

    with the heated air of summer.

    My legs were feeble, and my arms were weak,

    but I crawled the whole way through.

    I guess the summer never really ended.

    It still hurts to think of you.

    Way down here, where the grass is thick,

    where water runs through the river so quick,

    I will wait

    still as ice

    for the green

    of your eyes.

    I will wait

    until you

    love me too.

    12 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago
  • is this poem i wrote indicative of any real talent?

    i wrote it for a school assignment. the assignment was to create a poem called "the beowulf in me" or "the grendel in me" as we're reading beowulf and this is what i came up with. i actually enjoyed writing it but i'm not sure if it's good or just weird. feedback would be greatly appreciated.

    "The Beowulf in me"

    The Beowulf in me

    Comes out late at night

    To tear down the sky

    With hands big as seas

    And wraps it round my sides

    Its blackness loose and gaping

    Draping down sleek and cool

    Wants just to swallow me whole

    Next to Beowulf I’m safe

    Shielded from the rain and snow

    Follow blindly as he goes

    Wrapped in bearskin winter clothes

    Sword asleep inside a sheath

    Made of bones and hair and teeth

    From a monster and his mother

    Once so wicked, two dead fiends

    Face the darkness of their deeds

    To sit and wait in dreamless sleep

    Steel inside them sharp and clean

    I hear him call out

    Songs by birds extinct

    That echo through halls

    Into rooms unseen

    Waiting for new life

    Thrust from lips pursed tight

    Meeting the gray walls

    Without resistance

    As they are old friends

    At the tunnel’s end

    Green vines line the walls

    Roots grow strong beneath

    My bare calloused feet

    The air tastes so sweet

    In Beowulf’s place

    I stand as he stands

    Two feet planted firm

    And legs stiff as trees

    Deep down in the dirt

    Down below everything

    A place for no man

    No creature or song

    Could ever here be

    Just Beowulf and me

    Stars whine quiet and sweet

    Dark clouds run down my spine

    I hear Beowulf say

    Put it back before the day

    Leaks soft into night

    And shakes you awake

    And makes grass grow high

    All the children run and hide

    From the burning ball of fire

    But in his half shut eyes

    Teeth so brilliant white

    You can feel him smile

    Through the coldest night

    So I sew up the sky

    With my arms made of clay

    Morning light fills the air

    Glows dull on Beowulf’s hair

    Armor shines too bright to see

    Him disappear with the breeze

    To a gold-encrusted place

    Where only Beowulf could be

    3 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago
  • did that guy seriously try to sing marvin gaye?

    with like a 2 octave vocal range? if you're squealing like a pig to hit the high notes there's something wrong.

    2 AnswersCelebrities1 decade ago
  • my laptop won't charge?

    my hp laptop running windows 7 has just now decided not to recognize its power cord, which is plugged in to the wall and the laptop securely. yes, i checked every connection on the power cord very thoroughly and it's perfect. my battery power is dwindling and i really have no idea what to do. i tried booting without a battery, it didn't work. thanks in advance.

    7 AnswersLaptops & Notebooks1 decade ago
  • need some help with a girl!!!!!!!!!!?

    i think shes asleep but she wont wake up...i want her to wqke up i aksed her but shes still sleeping:( not moving help

    12 AnswersSingles & Dating1 decade ago
  • to socialists/anarchists/communists living in the usa?

    do you vote for the democratic party? or do you vote for a third party or just decline to vote. i actually knew a communist who votes for the republican party because she believes things have to get worse before they get better and a republican-led government will lead to the collapse of capitalism much more quickly

    4 AnswersPolitics1 decade ago
  • why can't i sleep?

    some nights i just can't/don't sleep. i'll get tired but i'm unable to actually pass into sleep. tonight seems to be one of those nights.

    1 AnswerMental Health1 decade ago
  • i think my dog has been replaced by another similar-looking dog but this one is evil help?

    i think my dog has been replaced by another similar-looking dog but this one is evil help?????

    8 AnswersPhilosophy1 decade ago
  • why can't the right admit they just don't like obama because he's black?

    you guys don't actually believe he's some evil stalinist tyrant that wants to steal your paycheck and give it to rapists right?

    24 AnswersPolitics1 decade ago
  • real talk for a sec?

    why do brown eggs cost more than white

    5 AnswersRoyalty1 decade ago
  • Do you trust the police?

    and would you call them in a situation where neither you or anyone you know is in danger such as if you saw someone shoplifting or doing drugs?

    17 AnswersLaw Enforcement & Police1 decade ago
  • 12-note scale in western music?

    why do we divide the distance between two octaves into 12 notes rather than 15 or 3 or 200? why 4/4 and 3/4 time so widely used compared to, say, 7/3 or 44/15 time?

    3 AnswersPerforming Arts1 decade ago
  • should I get the $500 ipad or the more expensive version?

    everything you believe has been sold to you.

    9 AnswersLaptops & Notebooks1 decade ago
  • why are people so intent on killing burglars/intruders?

    why do i always hear people complaining that it's against the law to murder someone just for entering your house? i'm not talking about people who are clearly trying to kill you but why do people place their own material goods over a human life?

    9 AnswersOther - Society & Culture1 decade ago
  • arcade game "assigned to another console" on xbox 360?

    my xbox broke so i took it to best buy where i had a warranty that guarantees it will be replaced by a new one on the spot. now i can't redownload my arcade games onto the new hard drive because it says that they're assigned to another console. how do i get the games i paid for?

    2 AnswersXbox1 decade ago