Thin King

what do u think of my revolutionary rap style www.myspace.com/rainmatrixmusic

tha problem is my search info says I'm 108 and female and thus I need a solution cuz I'm 24 and male

when u search my name it says I'm 108 and Female is there any way to correct this I saw no such information in edit profile

www.myspace.com/rainmatrixmusic

thats my music page

if u would critique my poem

I'm learning that there's no turning back

even if it's all true it still might fall through

I may be a visionary but tha mission varies

on this rotten earth, I sit locked in words

I sent tha close, nothing ends identical

as you dart, onward remember it had to start

thats me in life, cuz nothing begins twice

am I slightly demented, does yur sight be attentive

I might be breaking down, but your tha one faking now

a key writer in verses, no one's deciphering

in tha dark, shadows falling, like when I had no calling

in this world, crazy works, thats what will take me first

thank you to all that took tha time to read this...

2007 chad burke

So my theory is what wiped out tha dinosaurs was back pressure more specifically a great series of powerful gusting winds, any thoughts?

I have an invention idea that will revolutionize transportation is there any hope of me getting a grant to help with the process?

Take it apart. It comes from the heart. Yous aint at the finish. I'm not at the start. I like the war waging. Your flow is aging. My flow is caged in. Matter of fact it's so hot it's cajun. Look the art your staging. Take a five. You need to rest. Your flows barely alive. You could never be the best. I am the one I need to impress. I think yous overcome with stress. Thinking you could be the right support. Living only to protest . When your flows on life support. Yeah take a deep breath. You need air to your brain cells. I know it's not fair my brain sells. Haters say you can't do it your white. I can do what I want with my life. Yous has a problem with sight. So face this racist and you will taste this ace ****. Yous have never been a broker joker. I will take that risk. I will make the list created. You will are so unsituated. It won't have to be debated. Come to grips with reality. Yous living a fantasy. The truth I see shall hit me. I'm fantastic see. Yous blind to color. You own flow is unsure. It arrived a while ago. Now it wonder where you were. Try to knock me down a peg. Looks like your brains ran down your momma's leg.

What if I knew to much. What if it was all inside. What if I do to such. What someone does not provide. yeah I tell it like it is. I have to make an incision. So I fight with this. Only to make a damn decision. I wage a war all day. I command my thoughts. I stage a floor a say. I stand by shots. The ones from the mental gun. The reloaded brain cannon. I run from the sentimental fun. My devoted brain damage. I hate to wave the white flag. My denial I let loose. I wait to see the sights at. My own trial I produce. When I claim to no longer care. I only want to find it. I aim to be stronger there. I think I want to rewind ****. I shall take on my new past. I hate my old future. I vow to make do at last. I know I told the computer. I have many keys to unlock. I am not chained down. So a penny please for thought. Whose got brains now. Like a window stare with a peek. The same world that won't stop I'm out in. I can win so there is a peak. You know I was on top of the mountain.

You hope you get heard today. I don't know why, you can't back up a word you say. You spend money like you tell lies. More than you know, oops pow suprise. I'm sure the people now dead in IRAQ. More than equal those that died in the 9/11 attack. Freedom is obtained through letting go. Something you can't do,the smart ones are betting no. You cover your trail. Make American progress move like a snail. What for, fail machine or let's ban fun. Truth is all you do is tuck your tail between your legs and run. This country into the ground. Your money is all that makes sense. Untill it comes crashing down. It's funny you can be that dense. Democratic founded and lost along the way. Automatic and grounded the cost strong so we pay. The broke are sucked dry. You worship oil like others get high. Do you want regression. Are you afraid of progresion. Do the Democrats need to teach you a lesson. I think yous slightly impaired. You try to kill the problems first because yous scared. Ask who cared.

Please pick up where I left off. Please pick what their next on. I've debated I've won and lost. I've traded the one and only cost. So pick up my thoughts. Slip through my knots. Find a trace. Behind my ways. A path unique. I won't ask to speak. I'll just quietly whisper. Untill the words start to leak. I'll echo this Earth. My lost cries. My last tries. Always tossed lies. Floating in the vast skies. No wings. No fear. What it brings got me here. Taking turns today. Making learns a way. Breaking earns dismay. Aching concerns play. The forsaken burns away. This is what I'll give up. This is where you pick up.

What was it the ghost saw. Regarding the most flawed. The ghost never gets heard. But life is what you earn. So what did he see. The right to be free. Like the phantom of the opera. Let no person stop ya. He kept being invisible. It's all divisible. With all it's sub-sets. Life becomes subsequent. The lost then becomes potential. In this life becoming more sequential. The will to survive is all to essential. Evolution of thoughts. Can bring about dreams. The revolution of thoughts. Can bring doubt to the screen. So how do you know the ghost has eyes. If the ghost speaks not. The ghost tells no lies. He's real kid. Reveal this. Then tell me what the deal is. So ahead of the ish this life can provoke. Not behind a cloak. Behind his premonition. Like wanting to create after demolition. Like saying nothing expecting others to listen. I go on repecting and playing my position. Life is but one big exhibition. A man on a mission. Telling the fake not to audition. A ghostly vision. Let them play on, I'll do no wishing. At the end of the exposition. Throw this in. Let's put the fake in remission. Points among the missing. Like the ones they never provide. Them drama loving haters I can divide. I'm so fly I glide. I can pretend to tell the truth all day. Then say nevermind.

Call me Poseidon. I reside in. A cold ocean dividing. This is not over till' I win. Feel the surge. Like a sudden urge. The waves return. A call from the Earth. Pulling others till' it hurts. Yous has lost your sense of depth. You dont know if your immersed. Or if yous submerged. I'll take you out too deep. Like how I emerged. Swim now or stay. Not just an hour a day. For if you sink. You'll wish you had that long to think. What you waste sir. Will be your glacier. Small on the surface. Underneath it waits sure. Sure it will hurt his. Like a stage word. May their will promote. Only the smart and dead float. No escape and no boat. No island and no vote. Think not on this. Have you been tossed a rope. Don't struggle with the sand. But it was in the sand he wrote.

Who do I sound like, if anyone?

Do you like it?

If we have nothing but choices, from the time we know right from wrong. We must have a three fold path. Life must cross that middle line a lot. If we call right black, and wrong white. Why do we not look at problems like they are grey area?

I pick apart both components and find whats left that will not let the equation work. If every problem can be solved. Then every problem must be created. Our choices dictate this so maybe if we live neutral that is not trying to do good or bad. We'd have no problems but would all the other problems seem the same. The orgin will be. So the sun is golden. Every cloud has a silver lining. We have an essence that is grey and green. The tri fold Is divided at the middle to bi fold. what would one call the final centering of the two what color would it be it is the vast nothing, the yet to be, it is what you make it.

I wrote the poem entitled "First" it was published in an anthology by the American League Of Poets. 10 points if you can find it for me if not hey I tried but will you?

24 everytime

7 to the next

Spectrum or a sign

Why are they perplexed

We can only do so much

Just what is the limitation

One second out of touch

One moment evades erasing

I have found myself here

But which way am I facing

Two hands are moving

Only sometimes mine

The inertia of perpetual

Stops me in my tracks

This is just the usual

These are just the facts

You want me to get to crapping

How the hell did that happen

Were you fed ca-ka

Try again ho you ain't hot

Nobody ever beat off to chewbacca

Take your hairy *** comments back

You got whooped like the trick you are

Then you got smacked

So your gonna pop my ***

I put something in your mouth

You'll never hear the blast

Let off that Desert Eagle

Go home and feed you to my beagle

You wish you could steal the show

You only steal froms stores

You trick *** ho

Guns were meant to be shot

Bitches like you

Were meant to be stopped

Snitches like him

I think it's time you dropped

It's only a 187 if I ride slow

But it's a ************* hate crime

If I toss a grenade through your window

OHHHHHHHHHH! ***** Please, Snitch Please

Take out the man with the M-79

You aren't making a sound

Go ahead I'll make you respect mine

Or someone will go 6 feet underground

I might bang the gun

I might be gangsta son

So would you respect mine

If I whipped out the Tek-9

Not me smart not dumb

Everyday on the dialect grind

When I grab a mic

It's wreck time

So I will kill the beat

Not to know defeat

I go for it all

No pop verses on repeat

It's out of sight and enlightening

If it need be used for fighting

Go for the TKO

Minus the T

Now you know

So start battling me

A reply for my pain

I will not die in vain

I have loved

I have love to give

We order it all

Only one life to live

Three quarters then fall

I hope she find's me

I hope life reminds me

I have a choice in the matter

My voice in the latter

I can't wait to see

Who else relates to me

To compose a heart felt ryme

A rose to start but melts in time

The most beatifull to make us mourn

Life for us all

But still for all of us a thorn

Pull it out

Control the doubt

A vision of growth

What we all lack the most

On the side we are still leaning

I promise you can find the meaning

So what then

I was stuck when

Because they pretend

Saying I make no sense

God bless their ignorance

I have an ambiton

I love this life

F*ck others preminition

I'll take it to a new height

See me on the other cloud

Unseen and gone, another proud

I make something from this

I wait for onething, none exist

My mind, My brain, My soul

I designed, My game, I won't fold

One shot and many twenty fours

Days we got and not much more

Mold your clay

Hold and stay

It's all the same

Your poll I won't change

I stand down

Why demand now

Deny a man ground