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I never cheat, approach with a new technique,

Dont try to sneak, the mind of a freak can be very unique,

The thoughts toxic, cant stop this, could be a myth like the loctnus,

No progress, coulda regressed, movin forward is aint an understood process,

(Diff flow)

Thats why i become reminicent of my past memories,

Point out my errors and exploit all my enemies,

Damn im all ovver the place like im lost in the galaxy,what a tragedy,

I dream to get away from the reality, of all the problems souroundin me,

Rate my verse.. Been a long time since i posted on here but anyways....

Im from E-D-M,-O-N,-T-O-N,

The city where ur worst enemy was once ur best friend,

Cats around here go in, cant leave urself open,

Cold muthafuckas freeze you till u frozen,

They obliterate, anilate, disigrate ur dreams,

U gotta concentrate to penatrate, survive thro there schemes,

Minus forty degrees, the tempurature of the hearts of these selfproclaimed gs,

Take a life with ease, these sluts are all a tease,

Cant trust one, made that mistake but learnt from itll never happen twice,

Life is like a game of luck, you gotta know how to roll the dice,

See i was told if i want success i gotta make a sacrifce,

Sell my soul to the devil i aint willin to pay the price,

Its insane what this fame will do to your name,

Whos the blame when u exit out like kurt cobain,

Use ur brain, if ur to arrogant to realize the truth dont complain,

Be patient and wait, see what the future holds,

Life is like clay, sculpted it before it molds,

Judge by what you see not what you are told,

Eventually with time the truth always unfolds,

so this guy sounds like nas. i think its ns but evreyone else thinks its someone else.. if it is nas what song is it from

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hps7E6mMf5k

thank you for ur help!!! :)

Rate my verse. Point the good lines the bad lines, what to improve and what was really good for BEST answer.

It seems nowadays guys just wanna mount,

When the belly gets bigger thats their cue to get out,

Dead beat fathers, those are the biggest cowards,

If you couldnt be a parent why would you waste them hours,

She thought that he loved her,fooled by the flowers,

Now she all alone with twins on the way, two daughters,

What a senario, only option is either abort or keep,

****** sad, her mind racing fast,she losin sleep,

Shes in too deep now theres no way out,

Her life is ******, all she wanna do is shout,

Dropped outta school, got thrown out her house,

Her state of mind when from confident to being doubt,

She got no place to go, wonders the street desperatly,

Tryna find help thats shes been waitin for anxiously,

Awake at night plottin on her plan carefully,

All roads block her only hope is tragedy,

She collapses from the stress, gives in, commits suicide,

Caryin two babies now its classified as double homicide,

Im tryna step up my word play. Hear some i got now

Sick wordplay, i throw up on tracks,

My flow outstanding, overshadows what the beat lacks,

Each words foul, spit six, its over get a towel,

Your reign was as fast as osafa powel,

Call me jordan cuz im the greatest on the mic,

im baked like a cookie made of weed

My style you can hate, you in denial that im great,

In a suicidal state, when i close my eyes i visulize heavens gate,

Your 15 minutes of fame came and gone,you were to late,

Me im on my 14th but im still in better shape,

Dreamin bout the cake, never been baked,

Brain cells unharmed still i fail guess its fate,

I just cant ever catch a break,

Think its over? better wait,

Im hungrey with an empty plate,

Pass the bread, pass the steak,

If you sleepin on me, you better wake,

Secretly im plottin carefully, once perfected ill take over easily,

Call it robbery but honestly i could classify as the hottest mc,

Made it my policy to demolish those who try to diss me,

Get me angry, ill come at you lyrically,

Multies, i have infinate amount these,

Spit em rapidly,

My artillery is atomically aimed at my enemies,

I officially transphormed this industry into monopolies,

Im a menace to humanity, No apologies,

Are you kiddin me, no one can mirror me,

Try to battle me is a mockery,

Ill rip you apart savagely,

It'll crash the whole economy,

This is my city, leavin back a prophecy,

While yall study about equality,

Im mentally steady, been lucky lately i could probably win the lottery,

Literaly im comin at you with sick delivery, strikly flexin my writting ability,

This initally was suppose to be a story of tragedy,

Secretly im plottin carefully, once perfected ill take over easily,

Call it robbery but honestly i could be classified as the hottest mc,

It my policy to demolish these who try to diss me,

They gotten me anry, now im deliberatley comin at them lyrically,

Similies, i have infinate of amount these, spittin rapidly,

My artillery is atomically aimed at my enemies colony,

I officially have this industry in monopolies im a menace to humanity,

No apologies, are you kiddin me, no one can mirror me,

Try to battle me is a mockery, also very risky,

Ill rip you apart savagely,

It'll crash the whole economy,

This is my city, leavin back a prophecy, cleverly,

Yall study logically about philosophies and equality,

Luckily im mentally steady, probably win the lottery,

Literaly im comin at you with sick delivery, strikly flexin my ability,

This initally was suppose to be a story of tragedy,

Say what you liked and disliked and how to inprove to get the best answer!!!!

Reminicin bout them countless nights where i laid in bed starin at the ceilin,

The thoughts i have intense, when i put em in a rhyme there aint no better feelin,

Wanna avoid the money and fame although i cant front that life seems appealin,

Everybody fake and nowadays there identitys pealin,

Stunt hard but when push come to shove there nowhere in sight,

Definition of pussy, they all talk, no fight,

Got a loud bark, weak bite,

Yall bitches wanna go, just call mick,

He'll set it up then ill roast you world wide via skype,

Ight? Im sick of people actin different from who they really are,

I thought we were close in reality we were really far,

Our chemistry was negative like under par,

We were limited time, like a rent-a-car,

Hiphop is like life, once you live it you can never go back,

That aint a myth, its a common fact,

I was blind, thanks to it i opened my eyes,

Cause real eyes realize real lies,

Follow the leader as i guide you through this

story,

Veiwer descresion is advised, it gets kinda

gory,

Lemme take you back a couple of years, lil trey

standin in the doorway in tears,

Red and blue lights flashin, the whole

neighbourhoods in fear,

His parents lay on strechers, bullet wounds

cover them,

Pernounced dead on the ride to the hospital,

he already misses them,

Maturin, now 15, got a girl, she a dime, no one

nicer,

Years go by now hes alot older, more wiser,

Raised by his brothers, street thugs and drug

dealers,

Hood slang divides the hustlers and concelers,

Graduated highschool dispite the street life,

Dedicated his diploma to his parents, its a

incredible site,

Headin to college to get his masters degree,

In his heart he knows his parents are always

there to see,

Couple years later he propses to his high

school sweet heart,

Married a few months later, baby on the way,

now hes got a family to start,

9 months later, its a boy, he names him jones

jr after his father,

His first words, first steps, he counldnt be

prouder,

Late night a work, comes back, black car

creepin,

Ignores goes inside queitly, the fam sleepin,

Closes the door, seconds later the door knocks,

Opens the door, steps out gets shot,

Reminisin to his past, picture of his father in

the same spot,

Looks up at the door sees his son is in shock,

Follow the leader as i guide you through this

story,

Veiwer descresion is advised, it gets kinda

gory,

Lemme take you back a couple of years, lil trey

standin in the doorway in tears,

Red and blue lights flashin, the whole

neighbourhoods in fear,

His parents lay on strechers, bullet wounds

cover them,

Pernounced dead on the ride to the hospital,

he already misses them,

Maturin, now 15, got a girl, she a dime, no one

nicer,

Years go by now hes alot older, more wiser,

Raised by his brothers, street thugs and drug

dealers,

Hood slang divides the hustlers and concelers,

Graduated highschool dispite the street life,

Dedicated his diploma to his parents, its a

incredible site,

Headin to college to get his masters degree,

In his heart he knows his parents are always

there to see,

Couple years later he propses to his high

school sweet heart,

Married a few months later, baby on the way,

now hes got a family to start,

9 months later, its a boy, he names him jones

jr after his father,

His first words, first steps, he counldnt be

prouder,

Late night a work, comes back, black car

creepin,

Ignores goes inside queitly, the fam sleepin,

Closes the door, seconds later the door knocks,

Opens the door, steps out gets shot,

Reminisin to his past, picture of his father in

the same spot,

Looks up at the door sees his son is in shock,

Woke up in the middle of the night, the isomnea strikes again,

Past few days, lack of sleep been killin him,

Its five in the mornin, couple hours till his day begins,

Lays down, his mind explorin, thought brewin, his life ruined,

Hasnt been happy since his upcomin, the money got to his head,

Outside appearence solid but inside hes dead,

Rolls outta bed, walks downstairs starts the coffee,

looks outside snowin heavily, the wind sloppy,

Turns the tv on, anchors talkin bout a kidnapping,

Two lil children obducted, his heart starts pounding,

Tears fall from his eyes, hes scared for there lifes,

Shuts it off, house silenced, stands frozen for a minute,

Goes to the basment, guns loaded 6 bullets,

4 eyes stare innocent souls watch,

Unties the ropes, says ' the door is unlocked,

Cold metal pressed against his skull,

He looks in the mirrir a gives a lil chuckle

quality is average cuz i recorded from an ipod touch but still give a listen and feedback is encouarged!!!!

http://bit.ly/fhQpsL

' some people ask me if i think zionists are real,

and in my raps do i plan to reveal' this is from the distant relatives. WHAT DOES HE MEAN

Its called Street Riders- Game ft nas and akon.

I think nas verse was one of the hardest he ever spat

I dont even know how to start this/ Should i begin my career with some sorta diss/ I mean do i keep it lyrical or shoot for fame/ The debut album makes the emcee's name/ Should i rap like my generation or pave a road for the next/ I really could care less about whips money and sex/ Dont get it wrong, I'd love to ride down the road in a bens/ Have a milli in the bank. And beautiful women waitin on my beds/ But I'm not american, Ima Edmonton boy I come from Canada/ Rock the whole country from NewFoundLand to Brittish Columbia/ I got a revolutionary melody like the microphone fiend/ Spit meaningful bars like a daily routine/ I wanna amuse you, diffuse you, lyrically confuse you/ In my music i always leave a clue,that is only recognized by a few/ Got ya rewindin back listen over and over again like deja vu/ After this album drops ill be jumpin charts like a unstopable kangaroo/

Please explain your answer for the 10 points

Are the any nas songs where he doesn't swear