Mary

So I started writing this book because I wanted to try my hands at it and see what I can do when it comes to writing. I know that the grammar and stuff needs tweaked still but I want to know what you think about the story its self as of right now.

I have wrote 2 Chapters so far and just starting the 3rd. I don't have any set page numbers for the chapters I just ended them when they seemed right to me. Again this is the 1st time I have ever done any writing like this. I usually just write poems.

http://www.wattpad.com/34687172-the-truth-about-me...

That's the link to get to it. The name is The truth about Me and I think that is what I'm going to stick with. But I'm not 100% on where I'm going to take this story, Although I do have a few ideas.

Please leave me a comment on what you think but please be respectful and courteous. Rude and other non-helpful remarks keep to yourself please. Thank you for your time. :)

I hope you have a wonderful day/night

www.wattpad.com and look for Shya - sos .... that is the story that I'm working on

I have only ever wrote poems before but I wanted to give it a go at writing a book. I know that it needs work still and it is far from finished but this is what I have so far. The title that you use to look it up isn't the name of the story, I have yet decided in which direction that I'm going to take it so no title yet. I tried to be a little different with the character names and I will edit the descriptions further later. This is just the beginning of the ruff draft.

Please give me feed back so I can use it to correct my story, but please be polite and not rude and nasty with the remarks and comments.

Thank you very much for reading what I have so far. Have a great Day/ Night