Alexander Sterling<3

I'm 15 and I began writing this when I was 14, this is a part of my story and I want to know what you guys think??? Should I reword this? Start over???!!!

Thanks! =D

I was thoroughly revolted with myself; the touch of the boys neck under my grip, the smell of masked fear waiting to pour out, and most disturbing, the one single movement to crack his soon to be broken neck. The first time I ever did this─ I was thirteen in human years; it was a woman who had sold me a book that evening and I smelt her the whole day and that had to end. Looking down at the dead thing in my hands reminded me of her, that made me chew another piece of flesh and another till I was almost ready to cringe away from disgust. Clare, I suddenly remembered and felt bile make its way up my throat and out of my mouth, red bloody chunks flew out into the crisp air and onto the ground with a splat. Revolting, repulsive, sickening, ghastly, nauseating, disgust. I couldn’t think of any other words to use of how I felt right at this minute.

*********Oh by the way, the narrator is half faerie so yeahhh, pleez don't say he's a vampire**********..Lol.

Is it okay to already know what will happen at the end, and im also planning the end because i thought it would help me write the story which leads to that part..lol..does that make sense?

Thanks so much for your help!!!!

An ode to the stars…

You sit there in the sky

You shine and look so far away

You float like a light object on water

I wish I can reach, and catch you

The black sky is like a dark place to be,

Why can’t you talk to Me.?

Tonight is a new night,

It’s very cold out here, like a bee sting, but no feeling

I look up at you, no smile appearing.

No entertainment comes upon my twilight

The wind blow headed my way, like an avalanche of divine smell

Now our destiny is met, or is it just my imagination?

Be happy in your one home you know is safe to stay,

I’m not going to bother, I’ll just watch from far away.

Clearly you don’t want me to watch, but I can’t help falling in love,

You’re the one place I want to die in, I’m the wind and you’re my guide

I'm a writer and I mostly write poems and short stories,I will take any criticism, so tell me what you think!

Thanks much..= ]

Okay so for chemistry class i am doing A project on how eyeshadow is made, starting from raw materials to whatev. I have looked on google,ask,yahoo, and other websites and Nothing..can sombody please help me or show me a website??

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okay so theirs this guy,and i like him, he got my number, and we texted for a while i guess, and he said i was hot/cute..and like he asked me if i had a bf and asked for my picture, and everytime he would look at me then look away really quick..but lately he's been avoiding me..and idk what to think??..does he hate me/think im weird??..HELP.!