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  • What are your thoughts/feelings about this poem?

    THIS SIDE

    ~~by Sigurd Peterson

    All rights reserved

    This side paradise

    dousing I went times long ago

    bright douse and witchwood aldering,

    loosing adders long of fang and bitter

    venomous, unrepentant seeking gleaming

    nonpareils and gleaning parities

    arrayed of seeming majesty, in quest

    of perilous and peerless dowsabelle;

    dawed misbehavior of an evening,

    niggled all the cluttered mischief

    of a dazzled starry night, dispelled

    as ever of the morning’s light, proved

    as proved it must an arid waste of snow

    I came to know, smooth grey stones

    and pebbles by dawn played out

    at odds inample to hazards borne

    lissome as they were sundry likely

    villainies that storied drift me

    Dulcinea, mine dulce Isabel, douce

    Isabeau, digne dowsabelle;

    so sent for Pontus, this side paradise,

    now go cold in the quietness minivered

    less of royalty than penury and clad

    of stylite’s hair shirt, glad thereof,

    not even dusty footed for companionship:

    alone undoused, undowsing and undowsabelled,

    alone to earn my scallop-shell

    upon a different seashore

    this side hell.

    XXXXXX

    The spell check is going crazy!

    Wish I could center it, but alas, I cannot.

    3 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago
  • Observations on the first poem I've posted on Y/A?

    A Memorial of Herons

    By Sigurd Peterson

    All rights reserved

    We were herons once,

    and lanner both and lanneret,

    wheeling whipped and spun, tearing

    in silent easy flight

    across the promise of incredible night

    aslip the streaming air above.

    One quiet night’s afterflight

    when starlight dapped abright an ocean

    only partly real,

    we ploved and soared and gulled and scrayed

    the silentness of sky, falconed lanterns

    of all their mourning

    only to find atip the tide atoe.

    We were herons then, bright and brittle all,

    crisp and warm and moist of plumage,

    and white withal the night’s long harm and wait.

    And wait we did, a brief long while,

    until the flickering vanity of feast was guttered

    and the candle whiteness of our webs whole waled

    where lingering hurts had spent their mark:

    what were we then but snipes and pipers

    left to gledes and kites, left all alone

    adew, amourning, unworthy,

    unmeriting of cynosure?

    4 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago
  • A poem for your thoughts?

    VESPERS IN MILAN

    ~~by Sigurd Peterson

    Published, all rights reserved

    I lack the means and strength to seek new stars

    though dear would have possessed

    those which found proved fragile

    as harmless snow flecked mouse at caught

    cats’ paw play: I am alone, rare and a brother

    to dragons, honored but as a companion to owls,

    abstract and unable to demonstrate my theorem.

    Of no great moment, as scholars find much fault

    therein, though they be fools no less than I,

    they too seek mysteries in bagatelles and bags of shells.

    Had I time to go to Milan, had I all

    the wherewithal to seek shopkeepers,

    millers, weavers, lovers, reivers,

    could I recoup a courtier’s rage of pavanry

    by candlelight or stars, then could I well recall,

    recall too well what the haunting music hesitates

    to state overdistinctly,

    overprecisely,

    overclearly.

    In Milan, in the game of angels,

    kits and ladies’ slippers vie

    as trumps through mercies count for little

    seldom more than pebbles, and rarely

    half as welcome, sparkling jewels for less;

    and yet lackluster pearls and flame-stained opals

    outscore hearts. All this perhaps is

    as it should be, at least at vespers.

    I too, I too

    falchioned as needs rose and rued

    rosemaries, all long autumns past

    and in the duchies less imperial,

    less empirical, and so all the more,

    than Milan whose clouded pleasantries are sham

    duplicities and false as halls of mirrors

    looking forward, looking backward,

    looking glasses simply.

    In Milan, so it seems,

    souls are mint and vespers,

    nothing more, no more at all:

    there is no end to such a journey.

    2 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago
  • A poem for your thoughts?

    VESPERS IN MILAN

    ~~by Sigurd Peterson

    Published, all rights reserved

    I lack the means and strength to seek new stars

    though dear would have possessed

    those which found proved fragile

    as harmless snow flecked mouse at caught

    cats’ paw play: I am alone, rare and a brother

    to dragons, honored but as a companion to owls,

    abstract and unable to demonstrate my theorem.

    Of no great moment, as scholars find much fault

    therein, though they be fools no less than I,

    they too seek mysteries in bagatelles and bags of shells.

    Had I time to go to Milan, had I all

    the wherewithal to seek shopkeepers,

    millers, weavers, lovers, reivers,

    could I recoup a courtier’s rage of pavanry

    by candlelight or stars, then could I well recall,

    recall too well what the haunting music hesitates

    to state overdistinctly,

    overprecisely,

    overclearly.

    In Milan, in the game of angels,

    kits and ladies’ slippers vie

    as trumps through mercies count for little

    seldom more than pebbles, and rarely

    half as welcome, sparkling jewels for less;

    and yet lackluster pearls and flame-stained opals

    outscore hearts. All this perhaps is

    as it should be, at least at vespers.

    I too, I too

    falchioned as needs rose and rued

    rosemaries, all long autumns past

    and in the duchies less imperial,

    less empirical, and so all the more,

    than Milan whose clouded pleasantries are sham

    duplicities and false as halls of mirrors

    looking forward, looking backward,

    looking glasses simply.

    In Milan, so it seems,

    souls are mint and vespers,

    nothing more, no more at all:

    there is no end to such a journey.

    2 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago