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What are your thoughts/feelings about this poem?
THIS SIDE
~~by Sigurd Peterson
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This side paradise
dousing I went times long ago
bright douse and witchwood aldering,
loosing adders long of fang and bitter
venomous, unrepentant seeking gleaming
nonpareils and gleaning parities
arrayed of seeming majesty, in quest
of perilous and peerless dowsabelle;
dawed misbehavior of an evening,
niggled all the cluttered mischief
of a dazzled starry night, dispelled
as ever of the morning’s light, proved
as proved it must an arid waste of snow
I came to know, smooth grey stones
and pebbles by dawn played out
at odds inample to hazards borne
lissome as they were sundry likely
villainies that storied drift me
Dulcinea, mine dulce Isabel, douce
Isabeau, digne dowsabelle;
so sent for Pontus, this side paradise,
now go cold in the quietness minivered
less of royalty than penury and clad
of stylite’s hair shirt, glad thereof,
not even dusty footed for companionship:
alone undoused, undowsing and undowsabelled,
alone to earn my scallop-shell
upon a different seashore
this side hell.
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The spell check is going crazy!
Wish I could center it, but alas, I cannot.
3 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoObservations on the first poem I've posted on Y/A?
A Memorial of Herons
By Sigurd Peterson
All rights reserved
We were herons once,
and lanner both and lanneret,
wheeling whipped and spun, tearing
in silent easy flight
across the promise of incredible night
aslip the streaming air above.
One quiet night’s afterflight
when starlight dapped abright an ocean
only partly real,
we ploved and soared and gulled and scrayed
the silentness of sky, falconed lanterns
of all their mourning
only to find atip the tide atoe.
We were herons then, bright and brittle all,
crisp and warm and moist of plumage,
and white withal the night’s long harm and wait.
And wait we did, a brief long while,
until the flickering vanity of feast was guttered
and the candle whiteness of our webs whole waled
where lingering hurts had spent their mark:
what were we then but snipes and pipers
left to gledes and kites, left all alone
adew, amourning, unworthy,
unmeriting of cynosure?
4 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoA poem for your thoughts?
VESPERS IN MILAN
~~by Sigurd Peterson
Published, all rights reserved
I lack the means and strength to seek new stars
though dear would have possessed
those which found proved fragile
as harmless snow flecked mouse at caught
cats’ paw play: I am alone, rare and a brother
to dragons, honored but as a companion to owls,
abstract and unable to demonstrate my theorem.
Of no great moment, as scholars find much fault
therein, though they be fools no less than I,
they too seek mysteries in bagatelles and bags of shells.
Had I time to go to Milan, had I all
the wherewithal to seek shopkeepers,
millers, weavers, lovers, reivers,
could I recoup a courtier’s rage of pavanry
by candlelight or stars, then could I well recall,
recall too well what the haunting music hesitates
to state overdistinctly,
overprecisely,
overclearly.
In Milan, in the game of angels,
kits and ladies’ slippers vie
as trumps through mercies count for little
seldom more than pebbles, and rarely
half as welcome, sparkling jewels for less;
and yet lackluster pearls and flame-stained opals
outscore hearts. All this perhaps is
as it should be, at least at vespers.
I too, I too
falchioned as needs rose and rued
rosemaries, all long autumns past
and in the duchies less imperial,
less empirical, and so all the more,
than Milan whose clouded pleasantries are sham
duplicities and false as halls of mirrors
looking forward, looking backward,
looking glasses simply.
In Milan, so it seems,
souls are mint and vespers,
nothing more, no more at all:
there is no end to such a journey.
2 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoA poem for your thoughts?
VESPERS IN MILAN
~~by Sigurd Peterson
Published, all rights reserved
I lack the means and strength to seek new stars
though dear would have possessed
those which found proved fragile
as harmless snow flecked mouse at caught
cats’ paw play: I am alone, rare and a brother
to dragons, honored but as a companion to owls,
abstract and unable to demonstrate my theorem.
Of no great moment, as scholars find much fault
therein, though they be fools no less than I,
they too seek mysteries in bagatelles and bags of shells.
Had I time to go to Milan, had I all
the wherewithal to seek shopkeepers,
millers, weavers, lovers, reivers,
could I recoup a courtier’s rage of pavanry
by candlelight or stars, then could I well recall,
recall too well what the haunting music hesitates
to state overdistinctly,
overprecisely,
overclearly.
In Milan, in the game of angels,
kits and ladies’ slippers vie
as trumps through mercies count for little
seldom more than pebbles, and rarely
half as welcome, sparkling jewels for less;
and yet lackluster pearls and flame-stained opals
outscore hearts. All this perhaps is
as it should be, at least at vespers.
I too, I too
falchioned as needs rose and rued
rosemaries, all long autumns past
and in the duchies less imperial,
less empirical, and so all the more,
than Milan whose clouded pleasantries are sham
duplicities and false as halls of mirrors
looking forward, looking backward,
looking glasses simply.
In Milan, so it seems,
souls are mint and vespers,
nothing more, no more at all:
there is no end to such a journey.
2 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago