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  • What do you think of this writing so far? PLEASE HELP. It is very short!:)?

    “Because that’s what it’s all about, right?” Adriana had asked. Her twisted smile lit up her face, but it wasn’t a smile of happiness, it was more of an empty smile, the smile of a lost girl. Her fingers danced on the table, her eyes never leaving them. They both sat in silence before Adriana finally looked up.

    “That’s what life is all about? We are born to die.” She looked him in the eyes, but she saw straight through him. There wasn’t a hint of emotion hidden within them.

    “I guess,” was all Joey could say.

    Again they sat in silence. But it wasn’t an awkward one, it was a comfortable one. The kind of silence a whole movie theater shares after a breathtaking movie, or that two best friends encounter walking to class.

    The silence was broken by a buzzing coming from Adriana’s purse. She dug through it and within a few seconds lifted out her white iPhone.

    “I am so sorry!” she stressed the ‘so’, “but I have to take this.” And with that she grabbed her belongings and left the café.

    Joey just smiled, the kind that said ‘it’s alright I understand.’ But he didn’t understand. He didn’t understand how they hadn’t seen each other in five years, and she couldn’t miss one phone call for him? Who was it that was so important that she just got up and left, barely even saying goodbye? In the midst of all his thoughts he didn’t even hear the barista calling out his name.

    “Joey Hardings? Joey Hardings?” she had called. Joey quickly got up to receive his sandwich and coffee. He had expected to enjoy it with Adriana, but instead he trudged off to his room at the dorms.

    Criticism is what I want! So don't hold back, and don't be afraid of being mean. The more criticism the better! Thanks(:

    4 AnswersBooks & Authors9 years ago
  • What do you think of this writing so far? PLEASE HELP. It is very short!:)?

    “Because that’s what it’s all about, right?” Adriana had asked. Her twisted smile lit up her face, but it wasn’t a smile of happiness, it was more of an empty smile, the smile of a lost girl. Her fingers danced on the table, her eyes never leaving them. They both sat in silence before Adriana finally looked up.

    “That’s what life is all about? We are born to die.” She looked him in the eyes, but she saw straight through him. There wasn’t a hint of emotion hidden within them.

    “I guess,” was all Joey could say.

    Again they sat in silence. But it wasn’t an awkward one, it was a comfortable one. The kind of silence a whole movie theater shares after a breathtaking movie, or that two best friends encounter walking to class.

    The silence was broken by a buzzing coming from Adriana’s purse. She dug through it and within a few seconds lifted out her white iPhone.

    “I am so sorry!” she stressed the ‘so’, “but I have to take this.” And with that she grabbed her belongings and left the café.

    Joey just smiled, the kind that said ‘it’s alright I understand.’ But he didn’t understand. He didn’t understand how they hadn’t seen each other in five years, and she couldn’t miss one phone call for him? Who was it that was so important that she just got up and left, barely even saying goodbye? In the midst of all his thoughts he didn’t even hear the barista calling out his name.

    “Joey Hardings? Joey Hardings?” she had called. Joey quickly got up to receive his sandwich and coffee. He had expected to enjoy it with Adriana, but instead he trudged off to his room at the dorms.

    Criticism is what I want! So don't hold back, and don't be afraid of being mean. The more criticism the better! Thanks(:

    1 AnswerBooks & Authors9 years ago
  • What do you think of this writing so far? PLEASE HELP. It is very short!:)?

    “Because that’s what it’s all about, right?” Adriana had asked. Her twisted smile lit up her face, but it wasn’t a smile of happiness, it was more of an empty smile, the smile of a lost girl. Her fingers danced on the table, her eyes never leaving them. They both sat in silence before Adriana finally looked up.

    “That’s what life is all about? We are born to die.” She looked him in the eyes, but she saw straight through him. There wasn’t a hint of emotion in her eyes.

    “I guess,” was all Joey could say.

    Again the sat in silence. But it wasn’t an awkward one, it was a comfortable one. The kind of silence a whole movie theater shares after a breathtaking movie, or that two best friends encounter walking to class.

    The silence was broken by a buzzing coming from Adriana’s purse. She dug through it and within a few seconds lifted out her white iPhone.

    “I am so sorry!” she stressed the ‘so’, “but I have to take this.” And with that she grabbed her belongings and left the café.

    Joey just smiled, the kind that said ‘it’s alright I understand.’ But he didn’t understand. He didn’t understand how they hadn’t seen each other in five years, and she couldn’t miss one phone call for him? Who was it that was so important that she just got up and left, barely even saying goodbye? In the midst of all his thoughts he didn’t even here the barista calling out his name.

    “Joey Hardings? Joey Hardings?” she had called. Joey quickly got up to receive his sandwich and coffee. He was supposed to be enjoying it with Adriana, but instead he trudged off to his room at the dorms.

    Criticism is what I want! So please don't hold back. Thanks!

    3 AnswersBooks & Authors9 years ago
  • What do you think of this writing so far? PLEASE HELP. It is very short!:)?

    “Because that’s what it’s all about, right?” Adriana had asked. Her twisted smile face lit up her face, but it wasn’t a smile of happiness, it was more of an empty smile, the smile of a lost girl. Her fingers danced on the table, her eyes never leaving them. They both sat in silence before Adriana finally looked up.

    “That’s what life is all about? We are born to die.” She looked him in the eyes, but she saw straight through him. There wasn’t a hint of emotion in her eyes.

    “I guess,” was all Joey could say.

    Again the sat in silence. But it wasn’t an awkward one, it was a comfortable one. The kind of silence a whole movie theater shares after a breathtaking movie, or that two best friends encounter walking to class.

    The silence was broken by a buzzing coming from Adriana’s purse. She dug through it and within a few seconds lifted out her white iPhone.

    “I am so sorry!” she stressed the ‘so’, “but I have to take this.” And with that she grabbed her belongings and left the café.

    Joey just smiled, the kind that said ‘it’s alright I understand.’ But he didn’t understand. He didn’t understand how they hadn’t seen each other in five years, and she couldn’t miss one phone call for him? Who was it that was so important that she just got up and left, barely even saying goodbye? In the midst of all his thoughts he didn’t even here the barista calling out his name.

    “Joey Hardings? Joey Hardings?” she had called. Joey quickly got up to receive his sandwich and coffee. He was supposed to be enjoying it with Adriana, but instead he trudged off to his room at the dorms.

    Criticism is what I want! So don't be afraid to be mean :) Thanks!

    3 AnswersBooks & Authors9 years ago
  • Is this a good story idea? Please help! Ten points best answer (:?

    Okay so my idea is about a girl named Adriana. She is 19 years old and a huge celebrity. While visiting her hometown and old friends Adriana also runs into Joey (her best friend since diapers till the age of 13 ) Basically there will be a love story with Joey ( I know I know, original) but what I am really interested and focused on writing is that Adriana will develop Depression and an Eating Disorder. So the story has a few plot lines:

    -Adriana's reconciling with Joey

    -Adriana handling the celebrity life

    -Adriana dealing with her eating disorder and depression

    There will be more but this is just he jist of it. What do you guys think? Please be 100% honest! I need criticism. Any ideas would be helpful too!

    Thanks! (:

    6 AnswersBooks & Authors9 years ago
  • Is this good writing? PLEASE HELP. Very short!?

    “Because that’s what it’s all about, right?” Adriana had asked. Her twisted smile lit up her face, but it wasn’t a smile of happiness, it was more of an empty smile, the smile of a lost girl. Her fingers danced on the table, her eyes never leaving them. They both sat in silence before Adriana finally looked up.

    “That’s what life is all about? We are born to die.” She looked at him, but she wasn’t really looking at him. Her eyes went right through him, they showed no emotion.

    “I guess,” was all Joey could say.

    Again the sat in silence. But it wasn’t an awkward one, it was a comfortable one. The kind of silence a whole movie theater shares after a breathtaking movie, or that two best friends encounter walking to class.

    Okay so that is all I have so far. Please please please help me! Criticism is good! Thank you(:

    3 AnswersBooks & Authors9 years ago
  • What do you think of this writing? It's very short, please help!?

    “Because that’s what it’s all about, right?” Adriana had asked. Her twisted smile face lit up her face, filled with nothing but emptiness, the smile of a lost girl. Her fingers danced on the table, her eyes never leaving them. They both sat in silence before Adriana finally looked up.

    “That’s what life is all about? We are born to die.” She looked him in the eyes, but she saw straight through him. There wasn’t a hint of emotion lying within them.

    “I guess,” was all Joey could say.

    Again the sat in silence. But it wasn’t an awkward one, it was a comfortable one. The kind of silence a whole movie theater shares after a breathtaking movie, or that two best friends encounter walking to class.

    The silence was broken by a buzzing coming from Adriana’s purse. She dug through it and within a few seconds lifted out her white iPhone.

    “I am so sorry!” she stressed the ‘so’, “but I have to take this.” And with that she grabbed her belongings and left the café.

    Joey just smiled, the kind that said ‘it’s alright I understand.’ But he didn’t understand. He didn’t understand how they hadn’t seen each other in five years, and she couldn’t miss one phone call for him? Who was it that was so important that she just got up and left, barely even saying goodbye? In the midst of all his thoughts he didn’t even here the barista calling out his name.

    “Joey Hardings? Joey Hardings?” she had called. Joey quickly got up to receive his sandwich and coffee. He was supposed to be enjoying it with Adriana, but instead he trudged off to his room at the dorms.

    Okay so this is all I have so far. Please be 100% honest! Really the more criticism the better :)

    Thanks! :)

    Books & Authors9 years ago
  • What do you think of this writing? Please help! Very short(:?

    “Because that’s what it’s all about, right?” Adriana had asked. Her twisted smile face lit up her face, but it wasn’t a smile of happiness, it was more of an empty smile, the smile of a lost girl. Her fingers danced on the table, her eyes never leaving them. They both sat in silence before Adriana finally looked up.

    “That’s what life is all about? We are born to die.” She looked him in the eyes, but she saw straight through him. There wasn’t a hint of emotion in her eyes.

    “I guess,” was all Joey could say.

    Again the sat in silence. But it wasn’t an awkward one, it was a comfortable one. The kind of silence a whole movie theater shares after a breathtaking movie, or that two best friends encounter walking to class.

    The silence was broken by a buzzing coming from Adriana’s purse. She dug through it and within a few seconds lifted out her white iPhone.

    “I am so sorry!” she stressed the ‘so’, “but I have to take this.” And with that she grabbed her belongings and left the café.

    Joey just smiled, the kind that said ‘it’s alright I understand.’ But he didn’t understand. He didn’t understand how they hadn’t seen each other in five years, and she couldn’t miss one phone call for him? Who was it that was so important that she just got up and left, barely even saying goodbye? In the midst of all his thoughts he didn’t even here the barista calling out his name.

    “Joey Hardings? Joey Hardings?” she had called. Joey quickly got up to receive his sandwich and coffee. He was supposed to be enjoying it with Adriana, but instead he trudged off to his room at the dorms.

    Okay so this is all I have so far. Please be 100% honest! Really the more criticism the better :)

    Thanks! :)

    1 AnswerBooks & Authors9 years ago
  • Help! A "girl" problem...?

    Okay so im thirteen year old and just started my monthly gift last summer. My cycle (since like november) has been around the 24th of each month, so i was supposed to get it around the 24th of April.... but i still havnt had it? Ive never had sex... so i cant be pregnant, right? What else could be wrong? Please help!

    4 AnswersWomen's Health9 years ago
  • Story Idea! Please read and comment:) Ten points best answer!?

    Okay so i want your completely honest opinions please:) here it goes:

    In 2027 they found the cure for HIV. But what they dont know, is it created a virus beyond anyones imagination. The ability to make the dead, undead; even turning things alive, into creatures of the undead. No there not vampire, nor are the zombies. These creatures have incredible strength, speed, and agility. After the virus affected a few people, it got into water systems, and into certain animals. Luckily some people are immune to this disease, but that just means they have to survive the rest of the world that has turned into mutant creatures. Now Brielle, who just entered high school, and her best friend Lissa, must find away to make it to Alaska. Why Alaska? Because once the government found out about these creatures, they started building sort of "safe houses" in various places in North America. But Alaska is the only surviving "safe house" left. With no planes and trains operating, Brielle and a group of other survivors strive to make it to Alaska. But theres a twist, since the creatures took over there must be a leader of course, the ruler of all things evil. And this evil rulers son has his eyes set on a certain person.... Brielle. Now not only do they need to make it to Alaska alive, Brielle needs to make it there without becoming the lover of one of "them."

    I have an idea for a sequel but I dont want to give to much away:) Thanks please leave ur comments below!:)

    5 AnswersBooks & Authors10 years ago
  • Would you read this? 10 points best answer:)?

    Okay so i want your completely honest opinions please:) here it goes:

    So the book starts out with Brielle and her best friend Lissa going into high school, and right away things start to pick up. That night on the news they learn of a mysterious outbreak of a new disease. People start dropping like flies, but they dont stay dead. Now Brielle, Lissa, and a small group of people they met on the way, must find a way to survive the zombie Apocalypse. But the zombie outbreak is no accident; a couple years ago the goverment created a creature. A creature that was to be used as good, but turned into an evil creature. They tried to destroy it but it just became "undead." After it escaped the goverment has been trying to track it down, but sadly the creature carried a strange disease. The disease got in some water systems, and certain animals. Some people have been lucky and have become immune to the disease. Now Brielle must make it to the only "safe place" left in america... Alaske. See, once the goverment found out about the virus they started building "safe houses." Yet the only surviving safe house is in Alaska. Now with no planes flying, no trains moving, and zombies at every corner. Brielle and her friends must stick together and try to make it too Alaska... but most importantly; they have to make it there alive.

    I have an idea for a sequel but I dont want to give to much away:) Thanks please leave ur comments below!:)

    8 AnswersBooks & Authors10 years ago
  • Does this sound like a good book/series?

    Okay so i want your completely honest opinions please:) here it goes:

    So the book starts out with Brielle and her best friend starting high school. They make friends, meet boys, go to parties. But one day on the news the learn of a mysterious outbreak of a new disease. People start dropping like flies, but they dont stay dead. Now Brielle and her friends must find a way to survive the zombie Apocalypse. The only way to survive? The must make it to alaska. There, is the only place safe from zombies. Appearently the goverment new that this would happen, so ahead of time they created "safe houses." The only surviving safe house though is in Alaska. With no planes flying, trains running, and zombies at every corner of the street; how will Brielle and her friends make it to the safe house? But most of all, with they make it there alive?

    I have an idea for a sequel but I dont want to give to much away:) Thanks please leave ur comments below!:)

    8 AnswersBooks & Authors10 years ago
  • How to become famous....... 10 points best answer:)?

    Okay so i am a 13 year old aspiring actress. Ive been to multiple talent agencies and casting call, sadly only to find out they were scams. So i was wondering how to get into a good talent agency, or things like disney nationwide searches (i heard that was how selena gomez got started) I have been in multiple school plays (and i took an acting camp last summer with my best friend) I live in Washington State, and im having trouble getting started. Please help! If you have any info please tell me, this has been my dream since i could remember. Thanks!

    P.S. Also i was wondering if you could be in a talent agency that wasn't in ur state?

    P.S.S Please dont leave any rude comments, please only comment if you have some helpfull information

    P.S.S.S Do any of you guys know what the top talent agencies are in the state of Washington?

    Thank You All For Your Help!

    5 AnswersTheater & Acting10 years ago
  • How to become famous....... 10 points best answer:)?

    Okay so i am a 13 year old aspiring actress. Ive been to multiple talent agencies and casting call, sadly only to find out they were scams. So i was wondering how to get into a good talent agency, or things like disney nationwide searches (i heard that was how selena gomez got started) I have been in multiple school plays (and i took an acting camp last summer with my best friend) I live in Washington State, and im having trouble getting started. Please help! If you have any info please tell me, this has been my dream since i could remember. Thanks!

    P.S. Also i was wondering if you could be in a talent agency that wasn't in ur state?

    P.S.S Please dont leave any rude comments, please only comment if you have some helpfull information

    P.S.S.S Do any of you guys know what the top talent agencies are in the state of Washington?

    Thank You All For Your Help!

    3 AnswersTheater & Acting10 years ago
  • What is my mission.......?

    Mystery Seeker told me I need your help! Arianna the Ninja ready for duty(:

    1 AnswerGoogle10 years ago
  • What book out of these should i read for summer reading?

    Okay so for my school i have to read to books for summer reading. I have chosen 7 out of the books they had to consider (they had over 40 pages of book titles) If you want you can go to the website with all the books and tell me which two u would pick out? http://www.tbcs.org/uploaded/Middle_School/MS_Summ...

    Thanks!

    1.I, Robot

    2.Jurassic Park

    3.Princess Academy

    4.The Princess Bride : S. Morgenstern's Classic Tale of True Love and High Adventure

    5.The restaurant at the end of the universe

    6.Starcross, or, The coming of the moobs!, or, Our adventures in the fourth dimension! : a

    stirring adventure of spies, time travel and curious hats

    7.The young unicorns

    p.s. the books are in no particular order :)

    p.s.s. if you can think of any other books that u have read in the past that are good i can go through the list again and see if they have it.... Thanks =)

    7 AnswersBooks & Authors10 years ago
  • Help! Surprise going away party?

    Okay so i'm throwing a going away party for my friend (we've been best friends since kindergarten and shes moving away): ) And i'm completely stumped on what to do! She's 13, girly, but is open to pretty much everything. There is going to be around 30ish people, boys and girls. I was thinking of havin like a water gun fight in the forest (i got a HUGE forest in my backward) but then there would have to be a place where it was just social, dancing, talking, and eating afterwards but i cant figure out where to have that part. Also im TONS open to any other ideas? I really need help the partys in less then a month and i got to get invitations out! Thanks (:

    1 AnswerOther - Holidays1 decade ago
  • Good username ideas for youtube account?? 10 points best answer!?

    I'm trying to find a good username for my Youtube account. It has to be catchy and cute (: Im a girl + teenager.... I was thinking of like BlondieElf or something like that..... please help! normally im good at coming up with this stuff, but im stuck on this one...... :(

    Thanks! <3

    8 AnswersYouTube1 decade ago
  • Good username ideas?????? 10 points best answer?

    I'm trying to find a good username for my Youtube account. It has to be catchy and cute (: Im a girl + teenager.... I was thinking of like BlondieElf or something like that..... please help! normally im good at coming up with this stuff, but im stuck on this one...... :(

    Thanks! <3

    7 AnswersYouTube1 decade ago
  • Does this sound like a goo series idea?

    So basically i was thinking and i wanted to write a book about the lifes of pre-teens/teenagers...... if youve ever seen the show Degrassi it is kind of like that, with people coming in and out of school, not just focused on one main person. It will have the difficulties of living a teen life, alcohol, drugs, social life, sexual stuff...... So does this sound like something that would interest you in reading? Any pointers/helpful information and ideas? Thanks!

    3 AnswersBooks & Authors1 decade ago