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Silver
"The words of the Lord are pure words: as silver tried in a furnace of earth, purified seven times." Psalm 12:6 "And I will bring the third part through the fire, and will refine them as silver is refined, and I will try them as gold is tried; they shall call on My name, and I will hear them: I will say, It is My people; and they shall say, The Lord is my God." Zechariah 13:9 I am Silver. God be my Refiner.
Opinion on a poem please? I just wrote it, so it's a little rough.?
She kneels alone on the dusty street
after the crowd has gone
disheveled and broken who once was so proud,
her beauty in rags at her feet.
Around her the stones lie where they were dropped.
She trembles: a moment ago they meant death,
now a new thing she has not yet learned.
And still, the Man,
meek before her, His hand on the earth, intending she does not know what.
Yet stronger than men, and now she prepares
for a judgment much worse than before.
"My Lord," she pleads, and His eyes meet hers,
beauty for ashes is born.
"Daughter"- He says- the stones lie at her feet-
"Daughter"- my life is redeemed!
1 AnswerPoetry1 decade ago