Brayden

My partner and I have been trying for a baby for about 6 months now, almost to the day, I am probably just panicking over nothing, but could there be a reason it's taking a while. We're both 20, and are in good health. My partner had the marina implanted when we decided to start trying? Could that effect fertility or hormones at all? Not that you want the graphic image, but we've been having sex on a regular basis, and more-so when she is ovulating. We've been keeping track of all that stuff. What are the odds of a guy my age having a low sperm count?

I have an idea for a story that I am just working out how to start. I would like to get some honest feedback on the storyline. Any advice on how to start the story couldn't hurt either.

The story is going to be about a group of people taking a midnight train out of town. Each chapter I would jump from character to character, giving a bit of back story about each as the story goes on. Partway through the trip, the train buckles and derails off the tracks, killing everyone on board. I would start the next chapter with one of the characters waking up startled, still on the train, which is still safely on the tracks rolling along the tracks. He realises he must've just dozed off and had a nightmare. But then he looks around and all the passengers seem a bit agitated, like they too woke up from a bad dream, and there doesn't seem to be as many passengers as there was before. Then he looks out the window, and there is a strange landscape. It is made up of things that hold some significance to all the people on the train. They are in limbo. The train makes it's way through limbo and into hell. I was planning on having hell set in seven different sections. One for every deadly sin. The train will make a stop at each section, and whoever is guilty of that certain sin, is taken off the train. Then when everybody has been taken off the train, I will cut to each of the characters as they journey through each part of hell. Before the train crashes I was thinking about having a flashback sequence or two for each of the characters to see what they've done. I haven't come up with an ending yet.

So what do you think? If written well, could that make a good read? Any tips?

I have an idea for a story that I am just working out how to start. I would like to get some honest feedback on the storyline. Any advice on how to start the story couldn't hurt either.

The story is going to be about a group of people taking a midnight train out of town. Each chapter I would jump from character to character, giving a bit of back story about each as the story goes on. Partway through the trip, the train buckles and derails off the tracks, killing everyone on board. I would start the next chapter with one of the characters waking up startled, still on the train, which is still safely on the tracks rolling along the tracks. He realises he must've just dozed off and had a nightmare. But then he looks around and all the passengers seem a bit agitated, like they too woke up from a bad dream, and there doesn't seem to be as many passengers as there was before. Then he looks out the window, and there is a strange landscape. It is made up of things that hold some significance to all the people on the train. They are in limbo. The train makes it's way through limbo and into hell. I was planning on having hell set in seven different sections. One for every deadly sin. The train will make a stop at each section, and whoever is guilty of that certain sin, is taken off the train. Then when everybody has been taken off the train, I will cut to each of the characters as they journey through each part of hell. Before the train crashes I was thinking about having a flashback sequence or two for each of the characters to see what they've done. I haven't come up with an ending yet.

So what do you think? If written well, could that make a good read? Any tips?

I'm thinking Clint Eastwood, because he's an all-round movie maker. He produces, he directs, he acts. And he always tries to give his movies meaning to them. Even the action packed cop movies and gun toting westerns have meaning to them.

I have been a member since May 28th 2008.

There is talks of there being an Idiana Jones 5 in the works. Are you excited for it, or do you think they should've left it at 4?

It's been announced that they're going to be making a fourth Jurassic Park movie. As a Jurassic Park fan, I am excited about the idea, but I'm worried about it too. That maybe another movie would kill the series... What do you think?

I have been dating my girlfriend for about three and a half months. She has an almost 10 month old daughter and I truly love both of them with all my heart, and I know my girlfriend feels the same about me. We have so much in common and it feels like we've known each other for years. Recently, one of our friends have decided to move out of their home, so we've decided to move in together and take over our friends lease. Our friend hasn't quite moved out yet, but she should be gone in a month at the most, and then we'll be able to move in. What I'm worried about, is that we're moving to quickly. I personally feel like I am ready for this, and I have talked to my girlfriend several times, asking her if she really felt she was ready for the two of us to move in together, and she said she most definately ready. Lately, I have been thinking about proposing to her. We wouldn't get married straight away. I'd want to save money first. Before I started dating her, I always thought that if I ever started dating a woman that I thought was 'the one', I would date them for at least a year before getting engaged. But I really do feel she is the one, and I'm thinking, 'Why wait?' We both feel the same way. But I guess I'm posting this, because I would really value an outside opinion on whether or not we're moving too fast, and there isn't really anybody in my real life I can ask, so I'll ask the people in my virtual life.

Do you think they're alright, or do you think they're out of place and something that should be left for the movies?

There is set to be a third Jeepers Creepers coming out in 2013. But I doubt that date is very solid. It was supposed to be this year only mere months ago. So what do you think about there being a third movie? I personally think that the first movie was great, the second movie was watchable. If the third movie is simple going to do the same thing as the second one did and end up third for being a lesser quality movie, then they should stop now, before it's too late. But if they can make it as good as the first one or at least a bit better than the second one than it should be a good movie.

I'm about to start writing a story, and I feel that writing it in first person will make it more effective. But, part of me is thinking, the lazy part I guess, that if I write it in first person, writing from several characters point of views might be easier. So, I guess my question is: Does writing from multiple POV's ruin the novel, or is it okay of done correctly?

Victor Salva, the writer/director of the two 'Jeepers Creepers' movies gave more information on the long awaited "Jeepers Creepers 3: Cathedral" in February. He said that the script is set up to lead into a TV Series featuring the Creeper and Poho County. So, what do you think of the third 'Jeepers Creepers' movie, and more importantly what do you think of there being a TV show?

The only difference between Hugh Hefner and Charlie Sheen is that Hugh Hefner has a porno mansion, and nobody seems to give a damn about what he does. So all Charlie needs to set himself straight is a sex mansion.

Whether it's one he's directed, produced or starred in.

I love all of his movies, I don't think he's done a single bad one, so it's hard to choose. But I would have to say that "Pale Rider" really stuck out the most for me.