Spiritual Poem I wrote..what do you think?

"Troubled Soul"
You stood before me strong and tall
A mountain of love you give your all
You came into my life at a time I was low
And showed me love and the right way to go
All my pain and sorrow I put into your hands
I know no one else has the power but you can
To take my soul and wrap it in your arms
And keep it safe from all lifes harm
Worldly love I can get anywhere
But to save my soul takes a lot of care
The kind I get from only you
The kind I know will always be true
So I stand before you today
And with all my heart I pray
That you will take this troubled soul
And keep it safe as I grow old.

2007-02-27T16:27:34Z

This poem has been copy writed and published.But I'm not giving my real name[sorry] ..Thanks for the kind compliments guys.And it did come from my heart..

babydoll2007-02-27T15:23:19Z

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ttruytuyf, Weird War et al
Why do you all feel the need to disparage something that comes from a person's heart?
Lady bug, I too think you should have your poem copyrighted and perhaps see about having it set to music.

MunkyZero2007-02-27T23:18:00Z

I don't think this is a good site to post it on; you won't get very many serious answers from people who actually like poetry or care, not saying I don't.

maguyver7272007-02-27T23:17:32Z

Excellent!
That would be an Great Poem to put to Music.
Ditto.................

Later:
Yeah, you can Down Load the Forms from the Compute!
May GOD be with You, in Jesus Name!

drivn2excelchery2007-02-27T23:16:40Z

Beautiful! Make sure you get it copyrighted so that someone won't make money off of it.

Midge2007-02-27T23:24:26Z

Very nice!

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