I was going to use these lyrics in a song. What do you think about it?

Are you not tired of the same old rhymes
these rapper are conveying?
All I hear is blah blah blah
Don't they say music speaks
My rhymes won't put you to sleep
Who are you fooling?
I hear words but nothing extra ordinaire
where are you going
with that weak game you call rap
My ears are waiting for a lyrical resurrection.
Not a pile of words
with no significant meaning

dollface662007-11-29T13:05:21Z

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awsome
i loved it
no really i did i feel the same way about rap

Sheila D2007-11-29T10:34:43Z

I think it sounds very honest and true to it's word.

Chris E2007-11-29T10:28:44Z

I think it's really great, seriously!

Anonymous2007-11-29T10:39:29Z

it sounds true

Banana Hero [sic]2007-11-29T10:35:47Z

Not bad.