I was going to use these lyrics in a song. What do you think about it?

Are you not tired of the same old rhymes

these rapper are conveying?

All I hear is blah blah blah

Don't they say music speaks

My rhymes won't put you to sleep

Who are you fooling?

I hear words but nothing extra ordinaire

where are you going

with that weak game you call rap

My ears are waiting for a lyrical resurrection.

Not a pile of words

with no significant meaning