What is the scent of a daisy?
I am writing a sonnet in the style of the Romantics.
There are two lines I would like to replace by talking about the scent of the daisies, see asterisks (*). I Googled the scent of daisies and it looks like they are "scentless" flowers. Does anybody know if daisies have a scent or and if so, what is it? Here is the poem:
A multitude of daisies, light and gay,
before my eyes now boldly dares to sway.
Tis late, but I will watch in sheer delight,
collecting dreams that bid their fond goodnights.
And so I stay to breathe, for just a while,
the fragrance of each fairly floating smile.
What is wrong with such procrastination?*
Spring was late, to my sharp consternation!*
I would e’er remain with sun and shower,
each tossed nod of ev’ry laughing flower.
But now they bathe in dusk and musk of eve
and so I, too, reluctantly must leave.
The slivers of the sun sigh and recede
as lark skirls whisper lullabies to me.
Thank you!
Dear Poopy, Thank you for your comment about when daisies bloom.
I guess officially you are saying after June 21, which is the first day of summer. I wasn't conscious of that.
However, you will note that the reference to Spring is one of the two lines I would like to replace with lines about the scent of daisies. So, your point may be moot. But then, I'd feel like a really dumb bunny if I rewrote those two lines and kept Spring in there, so you've still been helpful. I am going to wait for a few more comments here because while what I've seen is somewhat helpful I would kill for somebody to "nail" the scent. It could be I've gotten as much info as can be had, but this damn poem in on Rev. VII where I am "workshopping" it online, so I'd really like to put it to bed. With thanks,
Margot