How much do you like this song I wrote and what do you think of it?

A guy starts walking down the street looking for someone to meet. When I see him standing there I just stare. So, he walks up to me and says "Hey, babe want to go on a date?" and I said "Sorry, it's too late." and he asked me why. I just couldn't tell him the truth nor a lie. So, I just said goodbye.

2008-02-05T14:50:22Z

This isn't suppose to be a rap song. I have a way with tunes...So, I think it sounds great...

remoserjr1072008-02-05T13:07:27Z

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A 'Star' is Born....!!

.2008-02-05T20:56:45Z

Sounds cool to me =]
Depends on the beat though
Good job! You should write some more!

Cody™2008-02-05T21:00:56Z

The only songs I like are the one's that talk about God.










... and some others.

pulse.2008-02-05T20:55:46Z

Uh that's not much of a song.
Maybe more of a poem or a reflection.

Elle*Cookie2008-02-05T20:56:28Z

personally i think it lacks depth
its a bit corny
and there's not much emotion or feeling.
but thats just my opinion

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