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How much do you like this song I wrote and what do you think of it?

A guy starts walking down the street looking for someone to meet. When I see him standing there I just stare. So, he walks up to me and says "Hey, babe want to go on a date?" and I said "Sorry, it's too late." and he asked me why. I just couldn't tell him the truth nor a lie. So, I just said goodbye.

Update:

This isn't suppose to be a rap song. I have a way with tunes...So, I think it sounds great...

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  • 1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    A 'Star' is Born....!!

  • 1 decade ago

    Sounds cool to me =]

    Depends on the beat though

    Good job! You should write some more!

  • 1 decade ago

    The only songs I like are the one's that talk about God.

    ... and some others.

    Source(s): BUT NOT RAP! I hate Rap
  • pulse.
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    Uh that's not much of a song.

    Maybe more of a poem or a reflection.

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  • 1 decade ago

    personally i think it lacks depth

    its a bit corny

    and there's not much emotion or feeling.

    but thats just my opinion

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    sounds like a story....

    where's the verse, chorus, hook, and bridge?

    send it to me..and i can turn it into a song!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    that was like a story...not a song

  • 1 decade ago

    I Iike it ! sound like a sad story !!!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    hehe that sounds kinda catchy

  • 1 decade ago

    I like it.

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