Anonymous
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Saying here would get me a violation notice, at the very least.
remoserjr107
A Smaller Green Door...!!
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What was behind the "Green Door" was a "secret".
My guess as to what that secret was is a "Honky-Tonk".
Additional info: Kids not allowed. . .and, the actual door was actually yellow.
Oooops! Thought you were talking about the song. Guess I'll leave it anyway. (guess I went through the "wrong" door)
Anonymous
The plot seems too obvious... Girl thinks that she's a geek, in reality everybody like her a lot, she likes the cutest boy and thinks he doesn't like her, and apparently he does love her because she's different, but she doesn't believe him. It's way too overused. And you were writing it too seriously for the plot. Way too serious. You need to somehow make it different than the other stories that have the exact same plot.
Jasx501
The green monster.