what do u think?

i wrote this poem and want to know what you think of it please be honest an tell me any thing you think i should change in it!




"I have a question
Just one question
I want to know
What happened
What happed to you!

You changed
Why did change?
Its not a good change
You changed
In so many ways
I don’t like it
Not one bit
Please change back

I want you back to normal
There many not be
such a thing as normal
But I want you
To be the way I knew you
When I meet you
When I knew I loved you

I don’t know anymore
I don’t why you changed
If you’ll go back
Or even if I still love you"

One Love?2008-04-23T18:30:37Z

Favorite Answer

its good but you could make it a little deeper. In the first paragraph last line i would make the ! a ? mark. It makes more sence that way. Because you are asking a question. Other than that its good.. good luck !

Crystal2008-04-24T01:48:27Z

It has some spelling errors and doesn't rhyme