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what do u think?

i wrote this poem and want to know what you think of it please be honest an tell me any thing you think i should change in it!

"I have a question

Just one question

I want to know

What happened

What happed to you!

You changed

Why did change?

Its not a good change

You changed

In so many ways

I don’t like it

Not one bit

Please change back

I want you back to normal

There many not be

such a thing as normal

But I want you

To be the way I knew you

When I meet you

When I knew I loved you

I don’t know anymore

I don’t why you changed

If you’ll go back

Or even if I still love you"

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  • 1 decade ago
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    its good but you could make it a little deeper. In the first paragraph last line i would make the ! a ? mark. It makes more sence that way. Because you are asking a question. Other than that its good.. good luck !

  • 1 decade ago

    It has some spelling errors and doesn't rhyme

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