Hey guys, so I need some help finding a poem, basically about wishing to be with each other. I'm in the military and am away from home right now. I wish every day that I could just be with her, and I can't wait for the day it happens. Any ideas on any good poems that suits the situation?
kimandchris22009-01-12T18:20:19Z
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The more I am away from you, The more I want you here. The more I do without your love, The more I want you near.
I know that it makes little sense To want what's not around, But there's just one true love for me And that's the one I've found.
We've gone through all the weather maps, The sunshine and the rain, But I would take a sea of storms To be with you again. Author: Nicholas Gordon
Absence
My love is like the sun that warms me when I am cold, And like the cool water of the brook that refreshes me. My love knows the secret pleasures of my soul, And delights with me in fulfilling them. Who is my love but the soul of my soul, And the reason for every beat of my heart. Who fills me with life in the joy of her presence, And returns to me more than I have given. Come to me, my love, I die without you. Each day is eternity, waiting for your touch. Remove the tears from my eyes and the ache in my heart, Be closer than my breath, all my days, all my nights.
Author: Phillip Varady Sr. (Excerpted from The Stonebearers)
Why don't you try writing a poem fo her. Here's a poem I wrote I don't know if it's any good, but you can use it if you want to.
With every day that passes I wish to see your face With every day that passes I wish for your sweet embrace.
I wish to hold you for as long as I can. I wish to here your loving voice..
I can't wait to kiss you I can't wait to tell you I love you.
Soon we'll be together, not much longer my love. For when I return it won't be wishing it will be real.
In my head and heart you will stay for ever I love you and that's for sure So till I return I will keep wishing for you. And when I see you the first words you'll hear are I love you.
You know how this is: if I look at the crystal moon, at the red branch of the slow autumn at my window, if I touch near the fire the impalpable ash or the wrinkled body of the log, everything carries me to you, as if everything that exists, aromas, light, metals, were little boats that sail toward those isles of yours that wait for me.
Well, now, if little by little you stop loving me I shall stop loving you little by little.
If suddenly you forget me do not look for me, for I shall already have forgotten you.
If you think it long and mad, the wind of banners that passes through my life, and you decide to leave me at the shore of the heart where I have roots, remember that on that day, at that hour, I shall lift my arms and my roots will set off to seek another land.
But if each day, each hour, you feel that you are destined for me with implacable sweetness, if each day a flower climbs up to your lips to seek me, ah my love, ah my own, in me all that fire is repeated, in me nothing is extinguished or forgotten, my love feeds on your love, beloved, and as long as you live it will be in your arms without leaving mine.
Pablo Neruda
OR: i carry your heart with me
i carry your heart with me(i carry it in my heart)i am never without it(anywhere i go you go,my dear; and whatever is done by only me is your doing,my darling) i fear no fate(for you are my fate,my sweet)i want no world(for beautiful you are my world,my true) and it's you are whatever a moon has always meant and whatever a sun will always sing is you
here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life;which grows higher than the soul can hope or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
well maybe i could help write down the way she makes you feel and things like that the things you love about her and maybe i could help you write a poem well i hope i can help :)