Do you feel the cold at this time of year?

Threadbare mists advance
Infiltrating the treeline
Creating a landscape of wraiths,
Spectres, tree-skeletons.
A muslin veil over
A half-world of
Soft shadows and
Sensed shapes,
Frost-rimed ephemera..
Fog flows up the valley
On ponderous lion's paws
A visual avalanche
Of silent white
Pillowed on the land
Sound and vibrancy
Choked off, stymied,
Hidden from view
In a sepulchre of
Swirling purest samite.
Timeless limbo
Holding off the sun
Until the light fades
And ice forms.
Winter reigns.

2009-01-21T05:19:16Z

Tony, I always associate samite with the beautiful, almost glowing white altar cloth that was used for High Mass and Benediction at my school Church during the sixties. It was, I believe, actually a true samite cloth with flecks of gold along the edge. This was the image I was thinking of when I looked down from the building site where I work as the valley below was silently flooded by mist and fog. I appreciate the comments, thank you. The comparison with Tennyson is somewhat giddying!! Lol!

Alobar2009-01-21T05:07:48Z

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It's too cold to turn the pages of the dictionary, damn it!

Your vocabularitory muscles serve you well with this write. And I'm so pleased I just created the word vocabularitory.

Tony h2009-01-21T04:40:55Z

Good stuff! Lovely imagery. I love it.
Like Tennyson you seem to think that Samite is a gauzy fabric, don't you? It isn't. Dictionary definition is a heavy silk fabric often with gold interwoven.
Still, making the same mistake as Tennyson can't be all bad.

*Jellz*2009-01-21T12:01:57Z

Belissimo!

Intrusivosity With Medium Doubt2009-01-21T12:36:24Z

The poem is totally cool. (pun and Cali -speak intended)

I see you sitting with a few fellow hard hats
writing this verse, shielding your face from
pieces of sandwiches......:)

My Grain2009-01-21T04:26:47Z

No cos I'm in Cambodia at the moment.

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