I wrote this poem for my pet guinea pig that died and I want to show you guys?

TOGETHER WE ONCE WERE-

Together we once were,
as happy as could be,
But luck soon fades,
including you and me.

I wish It couldn't be so,
although I know it's true,
And that the last thing that I said,
was ''I love you''.

The lives we shared together,
was so connected,
Now the hearts are fading,
and will soon be detected.

There will never be another guinea pig,
As soft and as sweet as you,
And I wish I had another chance,
To say much more than ''I love you''.

As time pushes us apart,
I will never forget,
The time we once had together,
Is now in debt.

When I see the sun setting,
I think of you,
But It's not the same,
As me being with you.

I know our time is up,
And I know It was short,
It's what nature does,
But I still wish for more.

I can see the sunlight fading,
Right before my eyes,
And when that time happens,
It's time to say Good bye!

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Anonymous2009-03-21T17:26:18Z

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That is really good! You'd make a great poet! I have 2 guinea pigs and one just got a tumor, I am going to expirience what your going through soon. =[. Yoiu know, if it makes you feel any better, there is a little baby guiena pig somewhere that is waiting for you to take it home. Try reading the book Chicken Soup for the Pet Lover's Soul. It was written to make people feel better, It is filled with stories of people who lost their pets. When my lizard died, I was so sad and felt so guilty (I don't know, it happens) And reading that made me forget about my loss, and feel bad for others. It really helps.

Anonymous2016-04-06T06:05:15Z

Ohhh I am SO sorry. I just lost my guinea pig Piglet too. This made me think of her and I feel your pain. They're such lovely little critters. I hope your heart heals soon and know that Pip loved you and will see you when you get to the Rainbow Bridge.

Sarah2014-11-10T22:10:41Z

Thank you. If youu don't mind, I'm going to read this when I bury my piggy Rose tommorrow. I found her a few hour ago.

Alix S2009-03-21T16:39:37Z

Aww thats so nice. And keep owning guinea pigs! Even though life takes it course you should make MANY guinea pigs very happy!

Blessings2009-03-20T23:33:15Z

Your very expressive which is good. Very sweet poem, you really must have loved the little fella.
Losing a pet is never easy, I'm sorry.

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