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If You Rode in my Car one More Time

And i let your music fill my car
in billows of thick smoke with the windows up, so we wouldn't have to talk.
When will you get with her or get rid of it?
Because i can't take this.

Do i regret the fact that i didn't kiss you?
i can't say.
Do you realize how much i want you?
You have got no idea.
We'll let the sexual tension build until everyone can smell it
But by then it will be too late.

Anonymous2009-07-26T22:59:59Z

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i love your style! keep writing :]

?2009-07-27T05:29:22Z

You have a lot of talent for sure
So keep on writing
I'd like to read some more!

Potential , you are on to something!
Lots of luck to you!!!

yahoo2009-07-27T05:17:58Z

omg this is too funny love it got it totally keep writing you've got talent for sure lol Thanks for sharing!

Anonymous2009-07-27T05:12:33Z

it's to cliche for me