Under a graying sky
A darkness towers above
Enveloped in warm velvet
A brisk and silky sky
Hurtling across the heavens
Hues of grey and blue
A blurry wisp of cloud
Pierced by towering pines
A ribbon of sap flows
Creeping around the knotty truck
Ants crawl slowly ‘round the bark
A hawk swoops softly overhead
Crisp breeze gently rustles the leaves
I am at peace.
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Actually, strangely enough, to me, it puts me in a thoughtful, melancholy mood. It doesn't brighten my day up exactly, but it gets me thinking about things. I like it a lot, actually.
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The scent of plant life The sound of bees The flavor of ants the texture of cheese The noise of flies The whistle of wind The flutter of butterflies The roar of being skinned The glow of the sunlight The gleam of the moon The patter of the rain the warmth temperature of the afternoon The crunch of twigs the dazzling thing approximately vegetation The splendour of earwigs the sweetness of Earth's powers
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Some good imagery there. It made me quiet. It's a calming poem. Didn't exactly make me feel brighter though.