I just wrote this poem this morning and was wondering if it's good. It's just a for fun poem.?

The Wren

A little wren looked in at me.
I guess he wondered who I could be.
I looked back with a little grin
and wondered where this wren had been.
He gave a chirp and ruffled his wings.
It's a song I've heard whenever he sings.
From the cold of snow to spring anew,
he bobbed his tiny head
and bid me ado.

?2010-02-13T07:02:30Z

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I have been answering a bunch of poem critiques this morning and this is the best one so far! I love the last line. You have great vocabulary and a creative original yet perfect title. keep writing!

Anonymous2010-02-13T07:17:11Z

Aww, that is so good! I love your rhyming choices, their great! You defintely have lots of talent, that i can see. Do you mind looking at mine?
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20100213065802AAlTJ5g&r=w

Anonymous2010-02-13T06:57:22Z

Cute! Its good. :)