This is "Love of Words." What do you think of it?

She told me tales, allegoric of this truth disclosed:
A year ago, a years-on friend who suddenly proposed!
A fear to know, she laughed at pining love left unopposed.
Too near to go, the spurning act built fences all enclosed.
A warning then, that I should not let my love be exposed.

I have a need -- "Will you marry me?"
Of tales I know distrust.
Love is free --
But strings and chains we bust.
I need to ask -- "Will words speak for me?"

I spoke the twain, made mocking promises to wear the yoke;
and now for her, the sacred vow has turned to silly joke.
She spoke the twain, unlaughing as she spurned me with a poke;
And now for me, the sacred cow has burned to wily smoke.
The walls of ice, the bleach-white cinder blocks are all now broke!

I have a need -- "Will you marry me?"
My words have gone to dust.
Words are free --
I write because I must.
I need to ask -- "Can words speak for me?"

This poem is published twice--once by the National Library of Poetry, and again in my anthology, Mangled Doves.
http://www.amazon.com/Mangled-Doves-Todd-Mikosh/dp/0557301807/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1271219674&sr=8-1

fantasticgirl2010-04-13T21:57:27Z

Favorite Answer

i think it is truly amazing.i total understand the meaning and i like how it is put over..i think lots of people can relate to this poem God bless the write......

Mr. Joseph2010-04-13T22:02:06Z

Chuck Berry

Anonymous2010-04-13T22:06:38Z

Wow, the National Library of Poetry. This must be really good then.

mtheoryrules2010-04-13T21:58:11Z

it flows well
I like this one too
in case the poem works

I am sorry about this
and I am sorry about that
I am sorry when you point the finger
three are pointing back
I am sorry I was not sorry
when I was supposed to be
and I am sorry for any future,
neglected apology