Who can help me with my story?

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That was my other question.

(I've eliminated the whole pirate part. {It is a bit stupid} So, don't worry about that.)

How could I improve the story?

Also, what key time periods should I include?

Any thoughts?

Cass 4 ever2010-06-12T14:16:22Z

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Pharaoh and a Slave- Egypt (Your character the slave the killer the Pharaoh or vise verse)
Crusades- years 1095 and 1291
French Revolution-1700's
American Revolution- American Fight with Great Britain 1700's (Characters can be on opposite sides)
Civil War- Mid-1800's (Characters one fighting for the South one for North)
World War I-Early 1900's
RMS Titanic- 1912
1930's Great Depression
World War II- Pearl Harbor 1940's
Vietnam War
1990's

I don't personally Believe in past lives but you story is original. Here are some ideas hope they help.

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