Who can help me with my story?
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AuqPb8CNlRy5EImvNXI_4w3sy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20100612073408AAL6R75
That was my other question.
(I've eliminated the whole pirate part. {It is a bit stupid} So, don't worry about that.)
How could I improve the story?
Also, what key time periods should I include?
Any thoughts?