What do you think of my painting?

I've been painting for about 2 years and I just recently found a strong affection for abstract art. This is a painting I did today in about 2 hours. I made it for my lovely boyfriend's living room. Won't you tell me what you think?

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TheRedEnigma2010-08-02T19:03:12Z

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It's pretty cool... i'd like that for my room... i guess it just depend on how his living room looks like...

Anonymous2010-08-03T00:58:09Z

I think you need to plan your work before you start. If you'd drawn out the lines first your piece would look sharper and more pleasing, I know planning is tedious but it really does work wonders for the quality of your finished work. When you're creating a piece like this with a complex pattern, it's best to figure out exactly where each line goes, how and where it curves and how best to transform from one colour to the next, again tedious I know but it'd really help.

Also, working on a black background might've made the colours pop a little more, especially if you'd given some of the curves a touch of a highlight. Actually, multiple layers of colour would make it stronger and give more depth too.

Markus!2010-08-02T16:09:01Z

I think it looks cool

Roberto D2010-08-02T18:33:11Z

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