my poem 'Inside Russia Today' like? not?

INSIDE RUSSIA TODAY

Yesterday I saw that new movie
the one about Vladimir, a Russian film-maker
working directly under Josef Stalin.

Vladimir was commissioned a film on Raskilnikof,
ambiguous anti-hero of the Czarist novel,
the metaphysical pawnshop killer.

He would show, must show, how, why
bourgeois society set the stage for brutality
onto which his sick protagonist would walk.

Simultaneously, to appease his conscience,
hiding in the mind from Party slogans,
he must make a statement, however subtle.

Vladimir’s script had made Raskilnikof, played
by Alex Druschevenov, into a movie director
wishing to document the pawn-broker trade.

Other important appearances include
the Bolshoi Ballet, dancing background
to the electrifying murder scene.

It’s hard to deny catharsis
as the bloody Raskilnikof, camera in hand,
heaves his Russian ax into the Volga.

The muted bells of great St. Basil,
over the year’s first snowfall, on Red Square,
where Vladimir, passing Lenin’s Tomb

GoldenSeaman2010-12-20T04:27:56Z

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nice

Rayven532010-12-13T10:05:27Z

I like it; find it oddly documentary and, yet, that's okay. You're definitely entertainingly articulate, and I've just noticed that I've just noticed you! Your answers are consistent with your writing, so I can only wonder why not more, since you've been out here near as long as I.

At any rate, write on...^10!

Bluedoll2010-12-13T13:43:11Z

Yes that is good. I specially like the title. It made me think, here are things, I know little of - yet just over the top all these things took place - interesting!

Rosalinda2010-12-13T06:35:54Z

Hi nice poem very strong and descriptive words, the voice, the mood and the vision gives this poem a nice flow, i like your poetic style, the pictures words is awesome, i enjoyed reading this poem. Keep it up.

?2016-11-07T14:12:29Z

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