THE FIRST MAN ON MARS a pseudo-haiku?

the first man on mars
saw this written on a rock
"this has not a meaning"

?2010-12-23T13:15:04Z

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I hate it when no one says ANYTHING good about my poems..
**struggles for a nice answer**..Well you did say pseudo-haiku..and it would freak the first man to read that message..so..YES..this is cute!!..:}

<32010-12-23T21:02:01Z

Nobody ever has been on mars..

and your format is wrong

its supposed to be:

5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables

You have
5
7
6

Oakwolf2010-12-23T21:26:42Z

I guess some people don't know what "pseudo" means.

Martians seem to be ironic people.

Anonymous2010-12-27T13:01:35Z

Do you serve as a reference?

How to make English haiku
http://haikudaigaku.uh-oh.jp/EnglishHaiku/

Anonymous2010-12-23T20:58:08Z

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