Not thinking
I grabed his hand
and squeezed it gently
in our shared excitement
The smell, unique in this world
one not duplicated except
sometimes in cans
phoney replication
I smiled at him
he winked at me and said
"Are you happy?"
"Of course I am" thinking,
who wouldn't be with that smell
that one of a kind smell
We went on our way
smug and shiney feeling
like everyone could tell
we had a new car
Rayven53
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So cute...lotsa fun...
only got one comment, hon:
It's grabbed vice grabed! ;)
Much enjoyed shirley!
THE BANNIBAL ONE
Only I could mistake the title for a song.
The smell of death is all around you,..LOL
Sorry,bad day,but a very nice poem.
New day ,new car,free to roam.
A good day..bye
PANDORA Πανδώρα
You had me guessing 'til the end...lol
Mine is a very old classic Merc and
I can still smell the leather...fabulous!
autumlovr
A great write Shirley!! yes I do love that smell but it will be awhile before I whiff THAT again! :o)))))
lovechild
Cute, sweet- ALL Shirley.