is this part of my story good?

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plese try to edit it in your own way. and tell me if you like my little sisters stuff she woulnt let me edit it


Zirt Legacy:   New Moon
	



         Zirts, human face but with animal ears and fangs. Human figure but with a tail and long nails for females. This race unknow to humans except in the old folk legends.

wanabewolf · Accepted Answer

who was that written by, because first of all, you could find better discriptions of what your looking for by going to just about every fantasy forum on the web, and secondly, the grammer in it is atrocious.  I could barely read it.  Add personal style for the love of God.  This is MUCH too bland, even if I could read it.

is this part of my story good?

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