Do you like my book idea so far?
My story is about a War in a fantasy world that I made up.
My main character, which is a girl, was born in the times of War. She lived hidden in a pacific land with her parents and she didnt knew about the existence of this War. She meets a boy and they become really close friends.
He really liked her hair because it was a messy blonde and umkempt. ( the reason why Im saying the color of her hair here is because, this main character is going to become a really strong female, and I made her blonde because I just dont like the stereotype of "stupid blondies".
I think its important to some girls see that not every blond is stupid or dumb. back to the story:)
One sad day, the boy had to leave and move somewhere else, and has a gift, the girl made a small braid and cut it and gave it to the boy so he could always remember her. ( what im trying to say is that she had a very happy childhood until he left.)
My story starts to get darker from here: The war reached the land where she was living. The soldiers killed her parents and kidnapped her. They left her in a place very far away from light. It was always dark. People made her a slave, and when she was 15, some even abused her.
It was hard life. And she lived like this for more 5 years.
(...) when she reached her 20s, she faked her death and ran away. It took her 5 days of running to finally see some light, and 3 more to reach a city.
Im going to skip a bit: She meets someone else again. At first they didnt really liked each other but then, with some time, they start to talk and become finally friends. He also remembered her childhood friend a bit.
They have the bestest relationship has friends until The war strikes again, and he gets killed, leaving her alone again.
So thats it. My main story and ofcourse the story doesnt finish there. I will show every detail about every Nation of the world ( there are only 4 ), I will add other characters and their adventures.
I made up every name of the nations, people, races, spells, swords, weapons, plants, magical creatures, language, culture, (...) I even made up hairstyles and designs. I want this to be totally original!!
What do you think of it? Im only 15 and my english isnt very good, but i only want to know if this is a good idea or not, and if you would like to read or not, because I will write this in my language anyways.
Thank you for reading!
I will. I just wanted to show like: this is war, people die. And his death is very important for the story. Just like her parents are. Her childhood friends does come back in the story. I know its very depressing at first. But I will add light to it.