Some translation from English to Serbian please?

What I'm trying to say is "Happy Birthday, pretty lady", does this work? "Срећан рођендан лепа дама!" (Srećan rođendan lepa dama !).

I'm shooting for mildly flirtatious, not creepy or overly forward.

Please, Serbian speakers only, I can run something through a translation program myself, I want to know how it would sound to a native.

Thanks in advance

JP2013-05-05T12:20:46Z

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Just change the last letter to "o" (damo), because it has to be in vocative case, not nominative (you are addressing her, she's not the subject of the sentence)