Would you comment on my story?
This is my first story and I'm afraid no one will read it. Please check it out and leave a comment? It's spooky - for Halloween.
http://www.wattpad.com/27649851-monsters
This is my first story and I'm afraid no one will read it. Please check it out and leave a comment? It's spooky - for Halloween.
http://www.wattpad.com/27649851-monsters
speranzacampbell
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Not sure, but what age is the narrator/main character? It comes across as a five-six year old. And what child of that age would leave from a "special class" to walk home in the dark alone?
It is a cute story. Not really spooky, somewhat obvious as to what will happen. I can see this a parody of a kids picture book with some Edward Gorey style line drawings. All in all a decent first try at writing.
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Very thought provoking.
Tony
The link isn't working. But I tried. :-)