Any c/c for this poem?

Slithering towards a drizzly dawn,
the sun hides in the East.
Must I move...can I?
Or write words into the screen
which does not answer.

If, according to some, this is a
travesty,
see Season one, of
the Game of Thrones.
A dragon will answer you.
Not me.
Not this time.

doclakewrite2014-08-10T06:24:32Z

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Bringing in a televised program into poetry ruins the path that your poem was taking. you cheapen it by trying to fill it in. Use your imagination and get back to reality, your descriptive power is good, use it..

Coop 3662014-08-10T07:02:41Z

Sorry but I can not help with the Game of Thrones. The weather is to my liking rainy.