Is this a good thesis statement for describing what an educated person is?

Education is the tool to achieving more in todays society, without education a person is limitless.

If not then please help me improve it because i have an essay tommorow and still struggling to come up with one.

MrSteve2014-12-13T14:11:37Z

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Sounds perfect!

Apphelper2014-12-11T16:56:35Z

I need to write an essay describing what an educated person is and i cant come up with a thesis! Hellllppppl!!!

?2014-12-11T16:48:05Z

i have no idea what you're trying to convey