Could somebody please critique my poem?
“Starlight”
I do not know what may occur
in the galaxiy's other neighborhoods,
but one thing I can say for sure -
on our space I have got the goods.
A star – for instance Sol – can beam
but the tiniest share of its total rays
to his own planets' life. 'Twould seem
the rest of his light streams on its ways
through countless other-worldy skies -
then falls, one of many a nighttime twinkle -
into countless alien systems' eyes
to make them romantically crinkle.
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