Is this grammatically correct?

I have even spoken to you about my intention to do this research and requested from you to facilitate me the opportunity to do such a research.

 

User2020-07-14T07:12:57Z

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No.

#1 - The use of the word "even" in this context suggests impatience or even discontent with the audience. Be sure that's what you want to indicate. Instead of "even", consider "already".

#2 - "...requested from you to facilitate me..." is incorrect. ("Facilitate" is being used incorrectly.) Try something like, "...requested that you provide me..." or "...requested that you assist me in acquiring..." 

#3 - "...such a research." - get rid of the "a", it's just "...such research."

RP2020-07-14T15:01:11Z

In explaining my intent to do this research, I have asked you to facilitate me gaining the opportunity to do it.

Mark IX2020-07-14T06:59:33Z

I have even spoken to you about my intention to do this research and requested you facilitate my opportunity to do such research.