I am less than halfway through writing a song and don’t know how to continue. I would like some feedback. Thank you!?
I wrote less than half of a song but don’t know how to continue my lyrics. Here’s what I have so far:
She knows he’s there
Far away, not anywhere
Where does he go
When I don’t know
Far away, he’s everywhere
This song is about a friend of mine who wants to commit suicide. I talk about my friend in this verse. In the next verse(s) I want to talk about my feelings and how my sadness turns into anger and my anger leads myself to suicide. (Only thoughts)
Typo***** I know he’s there