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I am less than halfway through writing a song and don’t know how to continue. I would like some feedback. Thank you!?

I wrote less than half of a song but don’t know how to continue my lyrics. Here’s what I have so far:

She knows he’s there

Far away, not anywhere

Where does he go

When I don’t know

Far away, he’s everywhere

This song is about a friend of mine who wants to commit suicide. I talk about my friend in this verse. In the next verse(s) I want to talk about my feelings and how my sadness turns into anger and my anger leads myself to suicide. (Only thoughts)

Update:

Typo***** I know he’s there 

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    Lv 7
    2 months ago
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    The night would be lonely without you, stay the course in the midnight air, leave the stars to their silent dance, and I'll run my fingers through your auburn hair.

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