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What do you think of my freestyle?

Check it out, tell me what you think (bearing in mind it's a freestyle & that I only started rapping this year)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uT9hkw0a0sw

Update:

ayt, I got it..constructive critisim is good thanx:)

Update 2:

Yo I ain't rich so I don't have a recording studio to properly record my songs and I don't have enough money to take vocal coaching

Update 3:

@Coungnatic Creix

It's okay man..that's what I plan on doing

Also I've only been rapping for 6-7 months

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    your flow is...you need to work on...f*ck it.

    You suck hairy donkey balls. Your flow is terrible. At least you can freestyle though. I would suggest taking vocal classes so you can find your voice and hit the syllables. And not sound like a p*ssy.

    Damn man, sorry I was harsh. Well then practice is all you can do. Good luck!

  • ?
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    Flow= Well it's easier to rate when your riding a beat beat but 1/10

    lyrics= 2/10

    Delevery= Put some effort into, it might be the recording but 2/10

    Not bad... for whoever you are....

    Keep trying....eminem was so wack when he started rapping....

    Practice makes perfect

  • 1 decade ago

    you should re record not dissin your rhymes or anything just because of the simple fact you should be loud as hell and in your face with it a little more instead of whispering do it somewhere where you feel comfortable yelling as loud as you can

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