U like the Poem?

I like your poem but it's so sad and lonely. It reflects the state you're in now. Hope everything turns out better for you though, good luck!

It`s okay, It doesn`t make very much sense. I don`t think your eyes could see the stillness of your own face. And you can`t hear deafness as it is a medical condition and not a sound. If you wrote it, I`m sorry if that hurts your feelings. Other than those few lines it`s an OK poem. Keep trying.

I like it very much, but it rally is sad, and it tells me that you are in such pain. You really need to talk with someone may it be someone in the Med Field or friend and or family you need someone to lean on. Also try praying, and asking God to help you get thought this pain. It work if you believe He will help you.

Bet you are a teenager.Hey cheer up,you will roll in laughter when you think about this 10 years from now.

That was very good you should

write a book of poems and enter

a poem contest.Keep on writing

and sharing.

yes the poem is really nice. its sad but nice u should keep writing and just write how u feel about urself .

I think it made perfect sense don't listen to what that other grl said... U r so talented, u should write a ******* book and hmmm dedicate it to me....lol

KEEP WRITING

it is a beauty of a poem that is being reflected by u.it is a superb poem

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