What do u think?

Pretty good ....i like it.

Amen.

2 things.

1)

"Fear of death follows from fear of life. Any man who lives fully is prepared to die at any moment."~Mark Twain.

Life life to the fullest, and have no regrets.

2)

I love the girl of my dreams. She is perfect in every way. She won't be mine. Ever.

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/;_ylt=AkBiYrQH5g...

Read it all. Same name.

Fell in love. Got up. Got over it. Much happier. Life's great. Still gonna try and ger her :-P

BTW, very nice. My problem is I realized this when I was 5. Oh the nights I cried. Then, I figured, 'Why cry? I got time. Make the best of it!' Live n learn!

GIRL this **** is so ******* good....and i thought u said u couldn't write happy poems...hit LIAR!!! Well i shall have to say this is my favorite poem now from you because i know its hard for you to write happy poems when ur sad...so YEAH HAPPY POEM!!! Also i like how it flows and it has a hidden message in their i am not gonna say cause that would unfair to the ppl who are gonna read this cause they need to decipher this on their own. PLZ keep WRITING!!!!

good now write a poem depicting a man whos girlfriend left him to be a stripper than they got back together but hes so confused...he loves her at the same time he cant stand her..all the lies has got her floating up above us all but what goes up has got to fall..

It's good...honestly you could use a little more depth...but I liked it

nice words .. hope every one read it , and take by it

u r proving that old memories are gold memories.... honey....

nice, sent me more

great....