POEM ?? Thank you friends!?

I like... do you mind if i add that to my website.... with our name on it of course

Smile, though your heart is aching

Smile, even though it's breaking

When there are clouds in the sky

You'll get by...

If you smile

With your fear and sorrow

Smile and maybe tomorrow

You'll find that life is still worthwhile if you'll just...

Light up your face with gladness

Hide every trace of sadness

Although a tear may be ever so near

That's the time you must keep on trying

Smile, what's the use of crying

You'll find that life is still worthwhile

If you'll just...

Smile, though your heart is aching

Smile, even though it's breaking

When there are clouds in the sky

You'll get by...

If you smile

Through your fear and sorrow

Smile and maybe tomorrow

You'll find that life is still worthwhile

If you'll just Smile...

That's the time you must keep on trying

Smile, what's the use of crying

You'll find that life is still worthwhile

If you'll just Smile

Not bad, Abigail.

You may want to not reproduce it in all capital letters, however. Also, the meter is regular in some places and not in others. It needs to be more consistent. It seems to want to be alternating lines of iambic tetrameter and iambic trimeter. Give that a try and see what you think.

This is also a bit generalized. I tend to prefer poetry grounded in concrete details. However, overall, this is a nice piece. :)

I don't understand this, the question, I mean.

Quite well-written poem, good job if it is written by you. Nice use of rhyme & interesting persona. But the caps definitely take away from the poem.

omg that was beautiful. to be able to express yourself is something that most people don't have the ability to do, i think you should send it in.. DONT CHANGE A THING

Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooook then

That is a great poem. So true..

*thumbs up*