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Nikki
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Nikki asked in Family & RelationshipsSingles & Dating · 1 decade ago

What do you think of this?

- His Brutal Hand -

Splattered tears drentched the ground where I lay

Breathing took a minate to remember the way

I tried and tried

I failed and failed

My head held an inpossible pain

I felt my heart beating in my brain

He just walked so coldly away

Leaving me to my own aid

Looking I saw it all

So much, so scared

Dripping and running it smuthered my face

Bleeding

Bleeding

Update:

Its about an ex boyfriend

Update 2:

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  • Mrs Wright
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    Its Really deep but i hope its just a poem and your not in a relationship with an a s s h o l e that would do that to you

  • rilindy
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    Very sad that you were treated poorly by an ex. Hope this experience does not mar you for life.

  • ?
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    Kind of depressing. Kick his a$$

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    nice thats cool

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  • xzhou11377
    1 decade ago

    very nice

  • MARK C
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    fine very fine

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