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Nikki
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Nikki asked in HealthMental Health · 1 decade ago

What do you think?

- His Brutal Hand -

Splattered tears drentched the ground where I lay

Breathing took a minate to remember the way

I tried and tried

I failed and failed

My head held an inpossible pain

I felt my heart beating in my brain

He just walked so coldly away

Leaving me to my own aid

Looking I saw it all

So much, so scared

Dripping and running it smuthered my face

Bleeding

Bleeding

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Its about an ex.......

Update:

Who are you to say what I have and haven't been through!!!! I was in an abusive relationship for a year.

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  • daidiiro
    1 decade ago
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    its great

  • murph_ltt
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    It's nice as far as poetry goes. But I don't think you've ever actually been hit before.

    Source(s): Divorced an abusive husband.
  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    that was so buddy i can't believe you wrote that

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