Plz Tell me about this poem?

Too many "togethers", all poems don't have to rhyme, it sounds like you have a writers block and are confused about something. And your poem really isn't going anywhere because the other words are drowning by the word together.

My dove crammed with love would desire to I take you out? according to probability we would desire to continually make a journey to the sea coast each and every 2nd spend with you is extremely like the water interior the air So crytial sparkling your continually on my recommendations If i'd desire to i might discover the words to teach i've got self assurance i'm typing this on genuine of my head so don;t chortle reason it sounds gay yet theres no different thank you to declare how i've got self assurance approximately you and approximately your question i might recommend writing what you sense reason so some distance my poem sucks in simple terms such as you reason love is a few thing which would be unable to be stumbled on like a poem you gotta realize it

I like the poem. If it's about your girl lucky her.

I think it's about intimacy, the kind you need to consider before getting married.

Romantic...although a little bit monotonous..

stopit poem

Its o.k.

Too much "lets do this" and "lets do that" for me though.

i like it and that pic of that lil girl is cute